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For Tunnel Vision

her tunnel vision let her see only his wealth and his handsome face in a tunnel she lies dead - victim of the rage he hid Jan. 28, 2021 for Kai Michael Neumann's Murder In The Tunnel Poetry Contest

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/30/2021 7:56:00 AM

Oh Wow, how awful. I fear new romances in this day and age, especially over the internet are a risk. I'm sorry she realized too late. Excellent write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 1/29/2021 2:35:00 AM

Aww, short, sharp and.. so brilliantly done in Tanka. I have not yet learnt to do many of these short forms.. I will have to learn reading your poems... A sure winner. Best wishes Andrea. Hugs ~ Ani

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/28/2021 11:21:00 PM

Happened much too often. The mark of Cain. ~~

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/28/2021 7:33:00 PM

Short and sweet...well malice rendered!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/28/2021 6:08:00 PM

Ooh. Sharp penning, Andrea. G.L. in the contest. ~ Stabbed

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/28/2021 1:40:00 PM

That does happen so many times and it is not limited to people of wealth. It happens in all classes and races. Creative work. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go for the contest. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/28/2021 2:07:00 PM

yeah, lots of nutty men out there. Many more murderous men than there are women!

Jack Horne

Date: 1/28/2021 12:53:00 PM

oh, LOVE this

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/28/2021 12:35:00 PM

Money isn't everything. Great write I hope wins in this contest.

Jcb Brul

Date: 1/28/2021 12:18:00 PM

Ohhhh!! What a short and powerful write!! So very uniquely yours Andrea!! Best wishes and more power in your pen.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/28/2021 12:08:00 PM

WoW! Andrea, What a good entry for the contest. Short on and concise, and it leaves the opportunity to envision their own scenario on how it was done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day - Alexis