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For Those Who Love

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Enchanted was I with a cloying scent... whiffs of wild magnolia mingled with the woodsy tang of lemon verbena perfuming the air Like Samson's strength, the sun's threads of gold were clipped by silver shears of an ascending pearlescent moon How sweet the bloom of love ~ We slowly walked around the lake By the zenith of eventide serenaded by a cicada symphony in rhythmic allegro thrum... In the distance, the howling of a feral creature crying with need of a mate How wild the passion of love ~ She tensed at his wailing call soothed with murmurs and kisses Her heartbeat in sync with my own... tympani drums keeping time like the pendulum of a metronome How musical the lyrics of love ~ Her eyes met mine... mirroring myriads of sparkling stars gleaming as bright as a prismed diamond I would pledge my troth tonight... Here, beneath a celestial bower How heavenly the gift of love ~ A tendril of long wavy hair blew across her cheek I crimped it around my finger then released a raven curl My lips whispered softly... I bent to her like a willow to the shore How eager the need of love ~ When I knelt she trembled at my intent... Bodies clinging, we swam fathoms deep surrendering to each other as eternal lovers passionately torrid... reverently tender How plumb the depth of love ~

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/13/2024 9:02:00 AM

Such a lovely and sweet write! The imagery draws us in. First 4 lines begin the thrill! Hugs ~ Kim

Lin Lane
Date: 11/13/2024 9:42:00 AM

In novel writing, it's called a 'hook.' I suppose it's the same hope in a poem. Thanks again for always being so supportive.

Michael Tor

Date: 11/10/2024 12:35:00 AM

Lin you take love and desire to another level. Your Free Verse captivates the readers heart and makes it yearn for more of your words. It creates emotions within and advents in once's life that bring about excitement and satisfaction in intimacy. As I take a deep breath and thank you for my cardio workout in reading this magnificent free verse. Hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 11/11/2024 1:47:00 AM

Thank you for your kind review, Michael. I'm happy to have given your ticker a little exercise, always grateful for your poetic encouragement.

Deb M

Date: 11/9/2024 12:41:00 PM

Queen of Romance strikes again!! Romance is your forte my dear sister....you do it beautifully!! Debx

Lin Lane
Date: 11/11/2024 1:45:00 AM

hmmm, I'm not sure I'll ever be queen of anything except my home. lol Thanks for your sweet thoughts, Sister Deb.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 11/9/2024 11:49:00 AM

Yes! Very romantic and so lovely! Have a wonderful time ~ AA

Lin Lane
Date: 11/11/2024 1:45:00 AM

Thank you, AA.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/9/2024 9:10:00 AM

Beautiful romantic poetry Lin, the last line of each verse read together are awesome too… Beryl

Lin Lane
Date: 11/9/2024 9:30:00 AM

I read the last lines as you did, Beryl. You're right... they do sound good standing alone. Thanks so very much.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/9/2024 9:08:00 AM

Wow, Lin:) a great poem, going to my favourites:)

Lin Lane
Date: 11/9/2024 9:29:00 AM

Hi Joanna and thank you for your kind remarks and the fave. Hugs.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/9/2024 8:54:00 AM

Love always a great inspiration for poets and artists alike, you were well inspired Lin. This one oozes with romance and passion. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 11/9/2024 9:28:00 AM

Thanks! I'm not sure what has inspired them, Tom but there they are. Past loves perhaps. I was drawn to the abstract artwork I found after writing this one. I think I may try my hand at painting something similar. I'm teaching myself to use watercolors, but not for this one. Bold, vibrant colors... maybe even oils.

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/9/2024 8:30:00 AM

Dear Lin, inspiring poetess, how enchanting your passionate free verse of love! It's been a while since since my heart and imagination have been enraptured by your captivating poetry. This romantic piece is breathtaking in its sensory and emotional imagery. I especially loved "In the distance, the howling of a feral creature/crying with need of a mate/How wild the passion of love ~" - giving their love and your poem a vibrant primal feel. Sumptuous! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Lin Lane
Date: 11/9/2024 9:25:00 AM

Hello, sweet friend. If these lines have put a spark back into your heart, I'm delighted to have posted them today. I always appreciate knowing which of my lines/verses finds it's way into the emotions of another poet. And when it's you, I know I hit the mark of what I was trying to express. Love is often primal, and all the other qualities I've used... there are so many more. Thank you for your ever gracious comments, Susan.