Pat Adams Poet Quatrain

For the Super Soupers

As I choose to peruse your poetic views
I absorb many mixed feelings in there
Filled with ambition, love and attrition 
From shyly bold to ragged rich debonair

This cauldron divine proves to show mine
As a confused rhymers rants I suppose
Show me no sorrow, I'll rise tomorrow  
I'll improve, but for now, I boop your nose!

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Cheryl Hoffman October 24, 2017 at 8:06 PM An interesting write Pat!~Che :) Pat Adams October 25, 2017 at 2:07 PM Thanks Cheryl!..............80)

Silent One October 24, 2017 at 6:20 AM Great expressions.. Well written Pat.. Pat Adams October 24, 2017 at 8:16 AM Much appreciated my friend!!..................80)

Darlene De Beaulieu October 23, 2017 at 8:49 PM This is one way to express yourself. you did that well. Yes you will rise tomorrow!! have a nice evening my friend. Pat Adams October 23, 2017 at 10:24 PM Thanks Darlene! I hope you have a wonderful evening yourself.................80)