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As I choose to peruse your poetic views I absorb many mixed feelings in there Filled with ambition, love and attrition From shyly bold to ragged rich debonair This cauldron divine proves to show mine As a confused rhymers rants I suppose Show me no sorrow, I'll rise tomorrow I'll improve, but for now, I boop your nose!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/24/2017 8:06:00 PM
An interesting write Pat!~Che :)
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Pat Adams
Date: 10/25/2017 2:07:00 PM
Thanks Cheryl!..............80)
Date: 10/24/2017 6:20:00 AM
Great expressions.. Well written Pat..
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Date: 10/24/2017 8:16:00 AM
Much appreciated my friend!!..................80)
Date: 10/23/2017 8:49:00 PM
This is one way to express yourself. you did that well. Yes you will rise tomorrow!! have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 10/23/2017 10:24:00 PM
Thanks Darlene! I hope you have a wonderful evening yourself.................80)

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