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For the Peace

Hand On hand Smile on lips Drawing the dawn For the rising face On the wide chest Smelling rose To hold Peace © Mahtab Bangalee 29/03/2023

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Date: 5/24/2023 9:22:00 AM
Superb writing! There is much to be celebrated in brevity. Your poem infuses peace with the allure of the rose. Excellent! Cheers, Brian
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Date: 4/10/2023 8:00:00 AM
Mahtab, very nice, lovely poem ! Check your soupmail.
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Date: 4/6/2023 4:46:00 PM
Such beauty of peace and serenity in your words, Mahtab! Thank you for sharing these lines that flow with tranquility. Blessings!
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Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 4/9/2023 9:22:00 PM
Thanks dear poet for your reading and commenting

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