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For the Love of Weather

Thunderous storm
Taking form
Black cloud
Dark shroud
Dogs yowling
Wind howling
Dusty ground 
Swirling round
Grasses curl
Leaves twirl
Trees rustle
People hustle
Animals flee
Kids glee
Umbrellas out
Mothers shout
I stand 
Raised hand
Loving power
Heavenly shower
Lightning flash
Thunder crash
Babies cry
Mothers sigh
Up higher
Tree fire
Go hide
Inside
Watch rain
Through pane
Safe, warm
Raging storm
Passing by
Blue sky

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Date: 11/4/2023 3:33:00 PM
Really imaginative piece Aly, I like your approach to this and bringing out the nature of the weather and all it's aspects too. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 10/5/2023 3:35:00 PM
Very creative I enjoyed reading your poem this evening
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Date: 10/3/2023 1:33:00 AM
Excellent rhymes and flow and the imagery is so vivid and palpable. I love this. As its raining right now as i read this too.
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Aly Bahr
Date: 10/3/2023 6:28:00 PM
Thank you so much Ink Empress.
Date: 10/2/2023 9:30:00 PM
Great poem, love the short verses and how it makes the poem flow of the page!! - Phoe :)
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Aly Bahr
Date: 2/25/2024 5:20:00 PM
Thanks lovely.
Date: 10/2/2023 8:58:00 PM
Enjoyed this rhyme!
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Aly Bahr
Date: 10/3/2023 6:29:00 PM
I'm so glad you enjoyed it .
Date: 10/2/2023 6:16:00 PM
What a list but it's in a good order.
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Aly Bahr
Date: 10/2/2023 6:24:00 PM
Thank you, I just want people to enjoy. :]

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