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For the Love of Weather

Thunderous storm Taking form Black cloud Dark shroud Dogs yowling Wind howling Dusty ground Swirling round Grasses curl Leaves twirl Trees rustle People hustle Animals flee Kids glee Umbrellas out Mothers shout I stand Raised hand Loving power Heavenly shower Lightning flash Thunder crash Babies cry Mothers sigh Up higher Tree fire Go hide Inside Watch rain Through pane Safe, warm Raging storm Passing by Blue sky

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Date: 11/4/2023 3:33:00 PM
Really imaginative piece Aly, I like your approach to this and bringing out the nature of the weather and all it's aspects too. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 10/5/2023 3:35:00 PM
Very creative I enjoyed reading your poem this evening
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Date: 10/3/2023 1:33:00 AM
Excellent rhymes and flow and the imagery is so vivid and palpable. I love this. As its raining right now as i read this too.
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Aly Bahr
Date: 10/3/2023 6:28:00 PM
Thank you so much Ink Empress.
Date: 10/2/2023 9:30:00 PM
Great poem, love the short verses and how it makes the poem flow of the page!! - Phoe :)
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Aly Bahr
Date: 2/25/2024 5:20:00 PM
Thanks lovely.
Date: 10/2/2023 8:58:00 PM
Enjoyed this rhyme!
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Aly Bahr
Date: 10/3/2023 6:29:00 PM
I'm so glad you enjoyed it .
Date: 10/2/2023 6:16:00 PM
What a list but it's in a good order.
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Aly Bahr
Date: 10/2/2023 6:24:00 PM
Thank you, I just want people to enjoy. :]

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