For the Birds: Contest

Rising from the ashes of broken wings
Eyes maroon. Body fiery red.
Wings engulfed in heavenly flames 
The Phoenix shakes her red and gold feathers
Preparing to take off towards the sun

Birds of all color 
Birds of all size
Birds of all majesty
Birds of all kind
Stand one by one
To watch her fly

Opening their beaks they harmonize in sound
Celebrating the birth of the one who rose from sins
Singing a song of sweet love and sorrow
Gracing her presence with hope for tomorrow

Raising each brilliant wing
She prepares to take off
With one last heartbreaking song
Her body ablaze she soars above
All alone higher and higher
She flies for the birds with broken wings
She flies for the birds with a song of no tomorrow
She flies for the birds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/24/2015 3:51:00 AM
Paige, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
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Paige Clinton
Date: 11/29/2015 8:50:00 AM
Awwwww! Thanks! I'm so happy I got such a high score!!!
Date: 11/22/2015 10:56:00 PM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning work Paige!
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Paige Clinton
Date: 11/29/2015 8:49:00 AM
Thank you! I worked really hard on this! You are so nice! Thank you for supporting me!
Date: 11/22/2015 3:33:00 PM
Congrats on the win Paige, interesting take on the theme.
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Paige Clinton
Date: 11/29/2015 8:48:00 AM
I tried very hard to make this poem as original and creative as possible! Thank you!
Date: 11/22/2015 11:07:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win... enthralling poem!! Terry
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Paige Clinton
Date: 11/29/2015 8:47:00 AM
Thank you so much! I'm so happy I placed so highly!
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