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For Summer's Coming

My joy

in May’s sweet blooms

is only surpassed by

those warm nights’ blossoming of stars

in June


6/4/2-17
For Line Gauthier's Bitesize Poem No56 Poetry Contest

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Christuraj Alex

December 12, 2022 at 6:36 AM

Wow! May for June! Congratulations!

Bobby May

December 12, 2022 at 3:54 AM

WOW Sis! this was almost as good as mine, ha,ha,ha,ha, lol, lol, lol but you did use my last name in your second line so, I should get some of the credit ha,ha, just kidding well done my sister poet

JC Brul

December 11, 2022 at 6:55 PM

Loveliness that soothes...I have no words. Congratulations.

Debbie Duncan

June 18, 2017 at 7:41 PM

Love that picture & the night stars. I live in Sacramento Calif. Libra with cancer rising& cancer moon :) I posted new poems.

Bartholomew Williams

June 17, 2017 at 3:40 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your win! I like how you tied day and night - as well as two months - together in one short, lovely write. Again, congrats! My very best to you! :) Bartholomew

Joseph May

June 17, 2017 at 9:29 AM

Glad to see this one on the list...Congrats on your win

Andrea Dietrich

June 17, 2017 at 11:40 AM

thanks so much. It never made the original list in the contest it was meant for!!

Connie Marcum Wong

June 6, 2017 at 6:10 PM

Ahhh, this is lovely Andrea. Romantic too! : )

Anand Parmale

May 31, 2017 at 11:25 AM

Beautiful

Supraja Kannan

May 30, 2017 at 7:58 AM

Lovely conquain Andrea... Beautiful imagery.... Blossoming of stars...Wow.. What a poetic verse! Great write....

Roy Pett

May 30, 2017 at 4:11 AM

Beautiful cinquain Andrea, every season has it's beauty but summer is my favourite, this is a winner in my book, :))

Alexis Y.

May 28, 2017 at 11:22 PM

Hi Andrea, Yes the summer is fast approaching. And I can't wait. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

White Wolf

May 28, 2017 at 11:17 PM

Oh, I like this one a lot, Andrea! It has winner written all over it! A beautiful succinct poem!

Arthur Vaso

May 28, 2017 at 3:40 PM

Such beauty in words and art. I dint see the rating back so I am giving this A7,a 10 a 100% and a Gold Medal!!!!!

Anne-Marie Coreggia

May 28, 2017 at 6:38 AM

Andrea, what enchanting images you create! I'm glad the rating is back. A7:)

Jennifer Walker

May 27, 2017 at 8:59 PM

Imagery, imagery. Such a lovely way to picture Summer.

Vladislav Raven

May 27, 2017 at 8:27 PM

Hi Andrea, once more your gentle words sing in this beautiful Cinquain. You bring to life the summer nights and the blooms of may. Love the imagery and Content. Excellent as always Andrea. Good luck in the contest Andrea. Hugs....Mike. XX

Carol B.

May 27, 2017 at 10:49 AM

Andrea, the flow is perfect and the image displayed is fantastic! Loved it :)

Paulette Calasibetta

May 27, 2017 at 9:19 AM

Andrea, you have captured it all! So lovely. Your words resonate keeping the gloomy days at bay!!! In the east we have had a lot of rain, but the buds that are turning to blooms are prolific!