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the whats-and-whys of your omissions have me pondering-wondering how can you not know that you torment me and play havoc with my mind sweet dreams do not come easily when my heart palpitates to rhythms of delirium is that all there is is that all we are is there more or is this it when i finally fall to sleep the questions fade away and silence is sweet again AP: Honorable Mention 2023 Submitted on January 30, 2023 for BRIAN STRAND CONTEST NO 1178 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on January 29, 2023

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Date: 1/30/2023 8:32:00 PM
Deep intimations, Line. Walk the tightrope carefully, please. Your friend, Gershon
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/31/2023 9:55:00 AM
Late in life ~ and we realize how there are no redos...
Date: 1/29/2023 10:11:00 PM
Nicely put. I'm sure many of us would echo your prayer! Elizabeth
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/30/2023 8:21:00 AM
Thank you very much, Elizabeth ~
Date: 1/29/2023 9:35:00 PM
The torments of the heart brought out beautifully, Line:)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/30/2023 8:21:00 AM
Much appreciated, Jo ~
Date: 1/29/2023 8:07:00 PM
we each battle our demons within. enjoyed your musings, Line ~ sweet dreams!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/30/2023 8:22:00 AM
Thank you very much, Seeker ~

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