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My Heart
Used
Still beats

My Heart
Low mileage
Over rocky roads

My heart
In vaulted box
Shipping included


No strings attached

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2015 11:49:00 PM

ahhh, this is an oldie I don't remember seeing! I likes it!! Soupmail (and yeah I said I LIKES it)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/9/2015 12:03:00 AM

Thanks Andrea

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/6/2015 11:35:00 AM

Tell the buyer to handle with care...sorry I'm late to congratulate you on TPOD...well-deserved and a fave...hugs, rhonda

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/6/2015 9:05:00 PM

Thank you Rhonda, you are so kind! :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/3/2015 6:16:00 PM

Thought barter would have been better. The taker would have gotten a good deal, though, as yours came with a POTD. Congrats! Kim

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/6/2015 12:06:00 AM

Thanks Kim!!!

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/3/2015 5:53:00 PM

Love your poem, Arthur. Very touching. Congrats on it being chosen Poem of the Day. Sandra

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/6/2015 12:06:00 AM

Thank you so much Sandra!

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/3/2015 5:11:00 PM

Grats on this being poem of the day sugar. :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/6/2015 12:06:00 AM

Grats on just being you!!!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2015 4:42:00 PM

Dear Arthur, A very clever poem that tugs at our heartstrings (even there are "no strings attached"). I fear there is too much mileage on my heart to go the distance for another shot at romance. Maybe I should seal it in the "vaulted box." Outstanding poetry! Goes to my faves. Love, Carolyn

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/6/2015 12:07:00 AM

Thank you, hopefully I have a big vault!!!!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/3/2015 3:39:00 PM

Congratulations on Poem of the Day.Dear Arthur, I doubt you will have any problem selling it. But like Tim says mark the sides fragile

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/6/2015 12:08:00 AM

Thanks Eve

Tim Smith

Date: 3/3/2015 1:26:00 PM

lol...so that's what you wanted me to ship. Just make sure you write "fragile" on the side of the box...cheers

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/6/2015 12:09:00 AM

I thought you would get a chuckle out of that!!! :)

Neva Romaine

Date: 3/3/2015 10:50:00 AM

Hey Arthur, BIG congratulations on your "heartfelt" poem being chosen as POTD. Filled with hope and great imagery. Well deserved!!. Be Blessed, Neva

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/6/2015 9:07:00 PM

Thank you Neva

Jan Allison

Date: 3/3/2015 10:33:00 AM

so so so glad to see this as poem of the day Arthur - congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/6/2015 12:10:00 AM

Thanks Jan, for some reason couldn't answer comments in here, seems fixed now!

Mohamed Adel

Date: 3/3/2015 8:52:00 AM

Nice poem Arthur, congrats :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/6/2015 9:07:00 PM

Thank you very much Mohamed!

David Meade

Date: 3/3/2015 8:32:00 AM

Mighty is this heart . . . your words beat strongly with a plea of hope, a hope for love . . . .

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/6/2015 9:09:00 PM

Thanks David! however I am hopeless!

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 3/3/2015 7:49:00 AM

congratulations for the Poem Of The Day selection, on this very deserving write.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/6/2015 9:20:00 PM

Thanks Robert, much appreciated!

Janet Eaton

Date: 3/3/2015 6:45:00 AM

Congratulations on poem of the day. I like it. No strings attached. Hugs Janet

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/6/2015 9:21:00 PM

Thanks Janet! :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/3/2015 4:49:00 AM

There are always strings attached! In this case...that's a good things. Congrats. Lovely

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/6/2015 9:27:00 PM

Thank you Eileen, in this case no strings and not a good thing, a wee bit messy too!

Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/2/2015 2:22:00 PM

Dearest Arthur, What a sad poem here my dear friend, Love your pics by the way, still waiting for the web-site for recovery's sake, lol I hope you find some lucky lady out their it won't be long my dear friend for a poetic fellow like you I'll cross my fingers that soon you can take down the for sales sign, cheri

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/6/2015 9:30:00 PM

Thank you cherl, I hope all is well with you!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/2/2015 10:01:00 AM

I like it Arthur.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/6/2015 9:28:00 PM

Thanks Richard, haven't been around all week, just catching up now!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/2/2015 9:47:00 AM

Ouch!!My heart-Numb..Pierced but it feels no more. A deep sad poem..and very inspiring too. My heart-Bartered and given..Returned but not for sale anymore.. A favourite Arthur

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/6/2015 9:26:00 PM

Thank you Charmaine! :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/2/2015 8:21:00 AM

I'll take it ! xxx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/6/2015 9:22:00 PM

Thanks Cas, and I have to so the one you did based on this! Well wonderful!!!!!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/2/2015 3:35:00 AM

Hope it gets a 'SOLD' sign or at least no vacancies sign on it soon Arthur - so sad a write my friend:-( Hugs jan xx 7 xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/5/2015 10:04:00 PM

Thanks Jan! hugs

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/2/2015 12:13:00 AM

Such powerful imagery. " I don't want it anymore" "My Heart Low mileage Over rocky roads" . these words almost brought tears to me. Maybe its the familiarity. X7

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