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My Heart Used Still beats My Heart Low mileage Over rocky roads My heart In vaulted box Shipping included No strings attached

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Date: 8/8/2015 11:49:00 PM
ahhh, this is an oldie I don't remember seeing! I likes it!! Soupmail (and yeah I said I LIKES it)
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Date: 8/9/2015 12:03:00 AM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 3/6/2015 11:35:00 AM
Tell the buyer to handle with care...sorry I'm late to congratulate you on TPOD...well-deserved and a fave...hugs, rhonda
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Date: 3/6/2015 9:05:00 PM
Thank you Rhonda, you are so kind! :)
Date: 3/3/2015 6:16:00 PM
Thought barter would have been better. The taker would have gotten a good deal, though, as yours came with a POTD. Congrats! Kim
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Date: 3/6/2015 12:06:00 AM
Thanks Kim!!!
Date: 3/3/2015 5:53:00 PM
Love your poem, Arthur. Very touching. Congrats on it being chosen Poem of the Day. Sandra
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Date: 3/6/2015 12:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Sandra!
Date: 3/3/2015 5:11:00 PM
Grats on this being poem of the day sugar. :)
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Date: 3/6/2015 12:06:00 AM
Grats on just being you!!!!
Date: 3/3/2015 4:42:00 PM
Dear Arthur, A very clever poem that tugs at our heartstrings (even there are "no strings attached"). I fear there is too much mileage on my heart to go the distance for another shot at romance. Maybe I should seal it in the "vaulted box." Outstanding poetry! Goes to my faves. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/6/2015 12:07:00 AM
Thank you, hopefully I have a big vault!!!!
Date: 3/3/2015 3:39:00 PM
Congratulations on Poem of the Day.Dear Arthur, I doubt you will have any problem selling it. But like Tim says mark the sides fragile
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Date: 3/6/2015 12:08:00 AM
Thanks Eve
Date: 3/3/2015 1:26:00 PM
lol...so that's what you wanted me to ship. Just make sure you write "fragile" on the side of the box...cheers
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Date: 3/6/2015 12:09:00 AM
I thought you would get a chuckle out of that!!! :)
Date: 3/3/2015 10:50:00 AM
Hey Arthur, BIG congratulations on your "heartfelt" poem being chosen as POTD. Filled with hope and great imagery. Well deserved!!. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 3/6/2015 9:07:00 PM
Thank you Neva
Date: 3/3/2015 10:33:00 AM
so so so glad to see this as poem of the day Arthur - congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/6/2015 12:10:00 AM
Thanks Jan, for some reason couldn't answer comments in here, seems fixed now!
Date: 3/3/2015 8:52:00 AM
Nice poem Arthur, congrats :)
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Date: 3/6/2015 9:07:00 PM
Thank you very much Mohamed!
Date: 3/3/2015 8:32:00 AM
Mighty is this heart . . . your words beat strongly with a plea of hope, a hope for love . . . .
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Date: 3/6/2015 9:09:00 PM
Thanks David! however I am hopeless!
Date: 3/3/2015 7:49:00 AM
congratulations for the Poem Of The Day selection, on this very deserving write.
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Date: 3/6/2015 9:20:00 PM
Thanks Robert, much appreciated!
Date: 3/3/2015 6:45:00 AM
Congratulations on poem of the day. I like it. No strings attached. Hugs Janet
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Date: 3/6/2015 9:21:00 PM
Thanks Janet! :)
Date: 3/3/2015 4:49:00 AM
There are always strings attached! In this case...that's a good things. Congrats. Lovely
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Date: 3/6/2015 9:27:00 PM
Thank you Eileen, in this case no strings and not a good thing, a wee bit messy too!
Date: 3/2/2015 2:22:00 PM
Dearest Arthur, What a sad poem here my dear friend, Love your pics by the way, still waiting for the web-site for recovery's sake, lol I hope you find some lucky lady out their it won't be long my dear friend for a poetic fellow like you I'll cross my fingers that soon you can take down the for sales sign, cheri
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Date: 3/6/2015 9:30:00 PM
Thank you cherl, I hope all is well with you!
Date: 3/2/2015 10:01:00 AM
I like it Arthur.
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Date: 3/6/2015 9:28:00 PM
Thanks Richard, haven't been around all week, just catching up now!
Date: 3/2/2015 9:47:00 AM
Ouch!!My heart-Numb..Pierced but it feels no more. A deep sad poem..and very inspiring too. My heart-Bartered and given..Returned but not for sale anymore.. A favourite Arthur
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Date: 3/6/2015 9:26:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine! :)
Date: 3/2/2015 8:21:00 AM
I'll take it ! xxx
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Date: 3/6/2015 9:22:00 PM
Thanks Cas, and I have to so the one you did based on this! Well wonderful!!!!!
Date: 3/2/2015 3:35:00 AM
Hope it gets a 'SOLD' sign or at least no vacancies sign on it soon Arthur - so sad a write my friend:-( Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 3/5/2015 10:04:00 PM
Thanks Jan! hugs
Date: 3/2/2015 12:13:00 AM
Such powerful imagery. " I don't want it anymore" "My Heart Low mileage Over rocky roads" . these words almost brought tears to me. Maybe its the familiarity. X7
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