For Real

she watches me leave with the summer night breeze
 
i feel her heart wishing this was the night we wouldn't part

being only who i can be - solid and free

reading eachother like an open book

having eachother mentally hooked

the time goes by so fast while we sit and speak of our past

no lies no denies both for real that's the deal

a safe place to go where no one has to know

only having to be one thing -me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 2:13 PM
Marcie, congrats on your feature...Raul
Brown Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 3:51 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Marcie. Love, Carol
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July 13, 2009 at 10:43 AM
It's sad but I really enjoyed reading it. Congratulations and more power. God bless. Ernilando
Adeite Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 10:18 PM
So sad, boring the mark of grief... Lost love. Wow, Great flow of words, this is a very passionate piece. Congrats on your awesome poem being featured this week. You are an incredible poet, please keep writing. Best wishes with your writings. Adeleke
Yates Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 7:28 PM
Very nice so honest and releasing... I get the feeling of freedom when I read this... very nice...!
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