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she watches me leave with the summer night breeze i feel her heart wishing this was the night we wouldn't part being only who i can be - solid and free reading eachother like an open book having eachother mentally hooked the time goes by so fast while we sit and speak of our past no lies no denies both for real that's the deal a safe place to go where no one has to know only having to be one thing -me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/14/2009 2:13:00 PM
Marcie, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 7/13/2009 3:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Marcie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2009 10:43:00 AM
It's sad but I really enjoyed reading it. Congratulations and more power. God bless. Ernilando
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Date: 7/12/2009 10:18:00 PM
So sad, boring the mark of grief... Lost love. Wow, Great flow of words, this is a very passionate piece. Congrats on your awesome poem being featured this week. You are an incredible poet, please keep writing. Best wishes with your writings. Adeleke
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Date: 7/8/2009 7:28:00 PM
Very nice so honest and releasing... I get the feeling of freedom when I read this... very nice...!
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