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For Nineteen Years

They are poor…they’re removed, they struggle through life, Every day is a burden on the edge of a knife, They’re stuck in the circle, that’s all that they know, And there’s not work around, and nowhere to go. But a man full of promise says he does understand, ‘My names Uncle Sam, please take hold of my hand, I’ll break the circle, and then I’ll bring you back, After a year from somewhere in Iraq.’ She stands at the cemetery gates. A small bunch of roses and holding back tears. Just three hundred steps to a name etched in stone That’s all she has now… for nineteen years. On the mantelpiece over the burning wood fire, A son’s photos, citations from her country’s desire as she sits and she weeps on the madness of war, And his last words she heard, “What am I fighting for?” She stands at the cemetery gates. A small bunch of roses and holding back tears. Just three hundred steps to a name etched in stone That’s all she has now… for nineteen years. 2nd January 2010 ©Lindsay Laurie

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Date: 4/11/2019 8:28:00 PM
'Lindsay, You really captured the emptiness, loneliness, and futility that are most often the only glories of war. Keep on writing! David:)'
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Date: 4/14/2019 7:05:00 PM
Hello David … I cannot help but agree any more with your comments about war. Many who go to war never really come home again, but relive the horror day after day - thank you David - Lindsay
Date: 4/17/2015 4:51:00 PM
Makes a darn good country song and darn good lyrics my friend. love phyl
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Date: 4/22/2015 8:19:00 PM
Thank you Phyllis for reading and commenting... possibly something that happens far too often. Regards - Lindsay
Date: 3/6/2015 8:51:00 PM
Well, I finally got to a different style poem of yours and I'm glad I did. Very moving. The refrain reminds me of the song by Country Joe and the Fish.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 3/11/2015 7:54:00 PM
Thanks again for putting up a comment Roy. I've not heard of Country Joe, but I'll google him up. Catch you later Roy - Lindsay
Date: 3/4/2015 3:11:00 PM
This remarkable poem is remarkable not only because it tells the truth, but does so in a moving, emotionally powerful poetic voice. Thank you for sharing it.
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Date: 3/11/2015 7:52:00 PM
G'day Paul... thanks again for reading and commenting Paul. Unfortunately war does not stop for families after the guns are silent. Catch you soon Paul - Lindsay
Date: 3/2/2015 6:21:00 PM
wow,what a powerful poem this is. REALLY great one on war. I like how you wove in the lines mentioning how long she has endured.
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Date: 3/3/2015 2:12:00 AM
Hello Andrea... Thank you for reading and commenting. The hidden casualties of war never go to war but they suffer their entire life. Catch you soon Andrea - Lindsay
Date: 2/20/2015 11:23:00 AM
“What am I fighting for?” pertinent question. In war all are losers...love Lindsay . God bless.//rajat
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/21/2015 6:48:00 PM
Thank you Rajat for reading and commenting... I can't imagine how powerless and terrified victims must feel when caught in a war theatre. Regards - Lindsay
Date: 2/18/2015 9:35:00 AM
Very touching and sad, Lindsay! In war everybody is a loser, but having said that I must admit that some wars are the fruit of necessity and are hard to avoid. It's enough taking a good look at what's going on in the world right now!!! #7 // paul
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Date: 2/21/2015 6:44:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting Paul. Sadly what you say is true about necessity of some wars. I find it hard to comprehend why humans cannot show tolerance, but then again, the rule of nature is that only the strong survive, and with humanity; power and greed determine our fate at times. Regards - Lindsay
Date: 2/17/2015 8:42:00 PM
Laurie, your poem is beautifully written with a profoundly moving message. Outstanding write! 7
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Date: 2/18/2015 2:09:00 AM
Hullo Connie, nice to meet you... Thanks for reading and writing an encouraging comment. I really do appeciate this. Catch you soon - Lindsay
Date: 2/17/2015 6:30:00 PM
Fantastic writing Lindsay a 7 & a fav! [Hey Lindsay - the spring CAN have to do with weather BUT it can have to do with ANY definition of the word spring- not just the weather!] Light & love
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/18/2015 2:07:00 AM
G'day there Debbie... Thanks for your comment on this sombre poem... I think we have an animal down this way to fit a limerick called a kangaroo that 'springs' to mind. Regards - Lindsay
Date: 2/17/2015 2:03:00 AM
Ironically "nineteen" was the average age of a Vietnam vet when fighting the Viet Cong! You are more than likely aware of that; puts a nice little twist on your poem! I do not myself subscribe to the view that all wars are avoidable. Oh for such a simplistic, uncomplicated world! Politics is complicated for the very fact that...people are also complicated. And that will forever remain so. God help us all. Good poem, mate! :-) john. P.s Any person who fights a just war has my utmost respect!!
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Date: 2/18/2015 2:04:00 AM
G'day John... Thank you for your interesting comment. I was ballotted out of conscription at twenty years old but the friend who I signed on the same day with fought in Vietnam. His stories and attitude were a lot different on his return. To be in a any war theatre must be frightening. Thank you John - Lindsay
Date: 2/16/2015 8:11:00 PM
This poem is a heart breaker but so very true. Never a more true term that that of-- War is Hell! What little ever is gain never comes close the that which is always lost... Great poem A7 and adding this gem to my fav list.. Thanks..
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Date: 2/18/2015 1:57:00 AM
G'day Robert... Thank you Robert and yes it so true with many families suffering from a loved one becoming a casualty. I wrote this to remind that every victim of war is a person who is loved and not just a number. Thanks again Robert - Lindsay

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