Abdul Malik Mandani Poet Acrostic

For Love's Sake

For the old times' sake, come back to me,
Oh my Susana, my love. With
Rue my heart is laden.

Listen to the cries of my pining heart,
Oh my Susana, do come!
Vanquish this loneliness and
Embrace me in your loving arms;
'Save! Save me from this misery.

Susana, my enchantress,
Awaken the passion of yore,
Kiss me with thy burning desire and
Entice my soul with the magic of love!

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Dr.Ram Mehta October 9, 2014 at 6:28 AM A nice passionate write, congrats on the win, Abdul

Joyce Johnson October 8, 2014 at 5:48 PM Avery poetically written acrostic. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Maurice Yvonne October 8, 2014 at 5:09 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win.

Maurice Yvonne October 8, 2014 at 5:08 PM Excellent job, I really enjoyed this one.

Andrea Dietrich October 8, 2014 at 3:49 PM Oh, Susana! I wanted to think of the song! Congrats you did really well with this.

Brenda Meier-Hans October 8, 2014 at 12:26 PM Very lovely passionate poem so beautifully written. Congratulations on your win Abdul.

Jan Allison October 8, 2014 at 10:51 AM beautifully written Abdul many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen October 5, 2014 at 12:43 PM - Beautifully written to Susana, Abdul ! - // Anne-Lise :) Abdul Malik Mandani October 5, 2014 at 2:54 PM Thanks a lot for comments.