Amy Crofts Poet Narrative

For Love of Liliana

On the 30th of June you entered this world,
so cute and content my beautiful girl.
I have never seen such a proud father,
kissing your hands and feeling your feet. 
Little blue eyes so hard to forget 
wrapped in a pink shawl, you were my princess. 
Your brothers smile when he first met you. 
He stroked your cheek and called your name.
But, it was too late my tiny princess.
The angels couldn't wait any longer. 
On the 30th of June you left this world,
so peaceful and pale my beautiful girl:Liliana

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 21, 2010 at 4:05 AM Congratulations Amy, on your success in Deborah Guzzi’s, “Who Loves Ya Baby” contest with this with this sadly beautiful poem. It's easy to see why you placed. This one tears at the soul. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Janette Fisher January 13, 2010 at 6:25 AM Amy - many congrats on your winning poem. So sorry for your loss. Rgds Janette

Caroline Cécile Delacroix January 12, 2010 at 7:33 PM Oww, how very, very painful! So sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing such a difficult, but beautifully written poem. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

Joyce Johnson January 12, 2010 at 9:46 AM Amy, I am so sorry. Such a beautiful gift and then the loss. Your poem expresses both your love and grief and is worthy of winning. Love, Joyce

Elaine George January 12, 2010 at 8:41 AM Dear Amy, This is such a heart-wrenching poem and a beautiful tribute to your precious Lilana who is now with God. Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Much love, Lainie

Amy Crofts November 30, 2009 at 9:58 AM thank you for your lovely comments :) i feel much comfort in writing about the loss of my baby Liliana and it shows the rest of the world how she will be loved forever thank you love, amy-eve

Audrey Haick November 27, 2009 at 6:53 PM Beautiful tribute to your beautiful Liliana! She already knows you wrote this for her and I am sure she is pleased! God bless you and your family! Peace, love, audrey

Amy Crofts November 27, 2009 at 6:08 AM thank you sara :) love, amy-eve

Sara Kendrick November 27, 2009 at 3:56 AM So sad for a family to loose an infant. I know that it was difficult. I feel the joy and the pain in your write. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara