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for flir ty skir ty posie pies and lolly- gagging bummings i tip the cur vy of my hat to cap- less too e cummings for tur vy tops and downside ups his lemmings’ thrum um ummings i clicks the brimmy of my cup to brim- less too e cummings in thankfultude for all he dood un-doing with his dummings i tootootoot in rootless hoots for just- less too e cummings (with my apologies to this great poet, but I am not too fond of a few of the things he inspired in lesser poets!) For The "Something Different" Contest of Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 1/19/2012 2:06:00 AM
I love it! Please, PLEASE give us more! We have battle on against all this sloppy 'emotive' writing. Charles.
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Date: 1/2/2012 3:46:00 PM
Well I guess this poet was different. Wonder what he was on--ha ha. I guess all kinds of words can make a poem of sorts. Good luck on the contest. love phyl
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Date: 1/1/2012 11:56:00 AM
hehe, loads of smiles while reading this Andrea, all the best for Debbie's contest with this *different* piece :) love Wilma
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Date: 12/31/2011 4:42:00 PM
Lol well this definetly different. Lol. Funny write Hun. Re. I used to have her address but she's like 4 hr away from me. Maybe I will try writing her if I find address. I'm worried to. Not like her. Luv Michael
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Date: 12/31/2011 2:13:00 PM
LOL, great fun - I must admit, I don't think I know any of his work
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Date: 12/31/2011 8:48:00 AM
Guilty. yes i take my inspiration from him not to capitalize. yes e e cummings gives me my power to be different. but to be called a lesser poet. now for that i do protest. john
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Date: 12/30/2011 10:22:00 PM
What a delightful poem. It would be great fun as a sing along in a pub.
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Date: 12/30/2011 10:05:00 PM
This is different - it bears re reading. do you know the line by e.e. cummings - "Electrons deify a razorblade into a mountain range"? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/30/2011 8:59:00 PM
GeniuS! you just show me truly something different. Good luck on the contest hun and thank you kindly for liking my poem and your truly generous comments. Have a great party tonight!
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Date: 12/30/2011 7:49:00 PM
Andrea My tongue got twisted reading this! This one reminds me of a song: " I love to ut ut uple and bununu" Clever write. Your blog is great! Happy New Year! May we share more great ideas in the coming year. Dalila
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Date: 12/30/2011 5:57:00 PM
Loved it Andrea
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Date: 12/30/2011 5:02:00 PM
Oh wow!!!! his style, his lack of puncuation and capital letters....as if he had written (without the tongue in cheek!! ) great idea and great entry!! (I haven't yet thought of my "something different!!" Good job! Happy New Year, Andrea!
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Date: 12/30/2011 4:54:00 PM
i loved it,,something so different,,lol,,great work,,,i think it will do very well....
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Date: 12/30/2011 4:38:00 PM
I like it!
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Date: 12/30/2011 4:10:00 PM
Interesting work..Don't understand the slang..Good luck in the contest..My work "Spellbinding Love" is some version of the truth but very little of that..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 12/30/2011 3:36:00 PM
great bit of fun here mate:)
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Date: 12/30/2011 3:35:00 PM
Yes this IS "Something Different" Andrea. x-x-x-x-x-my fingers for you in the contest Andrea. - Happy new year to you!love from Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/30/2011 3:19:00 PM
Great post for the "Something Different" contest! It's hard to write something that is outside your comfort zone isn't it? I have written one and it was difficult...I even got one comment saying she wishes she never read it! Oh well, at least I don't write that way! You did awesome with this poem! Wonderful Work!!
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Date: 12/30/2011 3:16:00 PM
We have to be different...Or all our poems would sound the same. :o) (I think?)
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