L Milton Hankins Poet Personification

For Jose - In Memoriam

“Help me, Papa,” little Jose so plaintively said
As Deb placed his little body next to mine in bed,
He was so sick, and I had done everything I could
The vet had said he was coming down to the end
Both Deb and I couldn’t bear to do what we should.

“Papa, I don’t want to go. Cuddle with me, please.”
I hugged him ever so gently, brought up my knees
In his distress he could still show such warm affection
He licked my face and peered at me with sad eyes
He understood my words by my comforting inflection.

“Papa, please do something. I feel so awfully bad.”
So, Deb and I decided it was time to do what we had.
We wrapped him in blankets, off to the vet we went
“Papa, don’t be sad,” he gave a gentle sigh, “It’s best.”
But we could hardly bare to participate in his last event.

“Papa, it’s all right. I know you always do the right thing.”
I held him to my chest, while Deb began to softly sing.
The vet petted him on his little head and said, “It’s time.”
Both Deb and I sobbed, our heart was broken for Jose,
But we knew he’d wait for us at the Rainbow Bridge sublime. 

[Jose, our little chihuahua, joined Deb at the Rainbow Bridge on November 20, 2018. "Papa will be here soon," he tells her.]

FIRST PLACE WINNER
Written June 1, 2022
Submitted to "Personification - Pets Talking" Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Constance La France

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Connie Marcum Wong July 11, 2022 at 9:50 AM This poem is heartbreaking and so beautiful and so deserving of your first place win Milton. It has me in tears. Congratulations my friend. Blessings xxoo L Milton Hankins July 11, 2022 at 10:38 AM Thank you so much, Connie. I can no longer read it. It always brings me to tear, and I wrote it!

Constance La France July 5, 2022 at 10:08 AM Milt, oh my gosh, I was and am again in tears reading this emotional and beautifully penned poem. Congratulations on your placement in my contest, blessings ~ Constance L Milton Hankins July 5, 2022 at 10:11 AM Thank you so much, Constance. I really appreciated the placement in your contest. Jose was a sweet little fellow.

Christuraj Alex July 1, 2022 at 11:33 AM Great love personified. Congratulations! L Milton Hankins July 1, 2022 at 11:51 AM Thank you so much, Chris. I appreciate your thoughts.

Paula Goldsmith July 1, 2022 at 9:21 AM Congratulations on this wonderful win. WOW!!! What a write. I do not know how you could write this. You must be crying, I know I am. Yes, they will be waiting for us on the Pets Rainbow Bridge. I can't wait to be there. Have a great/blessed day....................... Paula Goldsmith July 1, 2022 at 11:56 AM I have been there and it is hell on earth. Be Blessed........... L Milton Hankins July 1, 2022 at 10:46 AM Paula, I relived that day with every stanza, and I could not hold back the tears. Thank you for your understanding and your kind thoughts.

Unseeking Seeker June 2, 2022 at 6:25 PM Extremely heart-wrenching, I went through this twice and then could not keep a pet again L Milton Hankins June 2, 2022 at 7:38 PM Oh, Unseeking Seeker, I understand completely. I haven't had a pet since Deb died. Just can't handle it anymore.

Paulette Calasibetta June 2, 2022 at 12:11 PM Oh, your poem gives me chills~a harrowing experience to have to put ones beloved dog down~a painful but beautiful write. Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette L Milton Hankins June 2, 2022 at 12:38 PM It was a difficult one to write, Paulette. As I told Caren, I cried my way through it. After all these years, the thought of that day brings me to tears.

Caren Krutsinger June 2, 2022 at 3:54 AM I have had to do this with Blue, Lucky and Nova - it is the saddest thing ever, but I know they are waiting with Peepers and Tom my cats, for when my time comes. That gives me comfort. Nicely penned Hank. BRAVO! L Milton Hankins June 2, 2022 at 10:10 AM Doesn't happen often, but I wrote this with tears flowing down my cheeks. I have a list, too. I could have called this Gretel or Sophie...same story repeated.

Tom Cunningham June 1, 2022 at 9:47 AM I don't think there will be many on here who haven't experienced the loss of a pet, but they're more than that they are family and leave a void when they leave us, We went through the same with ozzie our spaniel. It was a heartbreaking experience. Tom L Milton Hankins June 1, 2022 at 9:53 AM I know, Tom, and I am sorry for your loss, too. We lost Gretel and Sophie and, oh, so many more over the years. I think this is one of the hardest poems to write ever!

Jeff Kyser June 1, 2022 at 9:38 AM Oh man, hard memories. I've had two dogs put to sleep, just a horrible feeling. Miles was old and in pain and the right thing to do, Dizzy had attacked a child, also the right thing to do. But both left me really shaken. You've captured the anguish and emotion very well here. L Milton Hankins June 1, 2022 at 9:55 AM Thank you, Jeff. It is a very hard thing to do, but so necessary, when the time comes. I told Tom this was one of the hardest poems to write ever. I was writing through tears, and it has been quite some time.