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For John Freeman: Godly Limerick

Look at me; I am so successful!
I am nothing save for Jesus' blood!
Have no god before Me
Love God first then your neighbor
If you love Me, serve widows and orphans.

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Katherine Stella

Date: 6/26/2010 7:53:00 AM

wtg on this win well deserve and you sure picked moses as a good topic lol great imagery me still smiling keep up the great writing also thanks a bunch on your kind comment on my poem hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2010 8:34:00 PM

VERY good, Doris, and congratulations.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/25/2010 11:18:00 AM

Congratulations Doris on your win in John Freeman's contest "Human Foible vs Godly Nature". Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/25/2010 5:14:00 AM

Congrats, Doris. Great write. You and yours have a great weekend. xxxRalph

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/24/2010 11:13:00 PM

Congratulations Doris on your fine Godly limerick and win. Love, Joyce

John Freeman

Date: 6/24/2010 10:17:00 PM

Congratulations Doris on a fine presentation. That is what pure religion is, hu, Doris! Let us remember to do our alms, and not before men. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/24/2010 5:30:00 PM

Great words. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for uyour comments on "Sweet Happening" Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/24/2010 12:54:00 PM

Yes, God wants us to share love and offer compassion to everyone. Very spiritually uplifting entry for John's contest. I think he'll really enjoy this limerick. Wonderful work! Love, Carolyn