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For John Freeman: Godly Limerick

Look at me; I am so successful! I am nothing save for Jesus' blood! Have no god before Me Love God first then your neighbor If you love Me, serve widows and orphans.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/26/2010 7:53:00 AM
wtg on this win well deserve and you sure picked moses as a good topic lol great imagery me still smiling keep up the great writing also thanks a bunch on your kind comment on my poem hugs
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Date: 6/25/2010 8:34:00 PM
VERY good, Doris, and congratulations.
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Date: 6/25/2010 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations Doris on your win in John Freeman's contest "Human Foible vs Godly Nature". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2010 5:14:00 AM
Congrats, Doris. Great write. You and yours have a great weekend. xxxRalph
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Date: 6/24/2010 11:13:00 PM
Congratulations Doris on your fine Godly limerick and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/24/2010 10:17:00 PM
Congratulations Doris on a fine presentation. That is what pure religion is, hu, Doris! Let us remember to do our alms, and not before men. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/24/2010 5:30:00 PM
Great words. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for uyour comments on "Sweet Happening" Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/24/2010 12:54:00 PM
Yes, God wants us to share love and offer compassion to everyone. Very spiritually uplifting entry for John's contest. I think he'll really enjoy this limerick. Wonderful work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/24/2010 4:12:00 AM
Well written Limerick and best of luck if it was for the contest, Doris...Gert
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Date: 6/23/2010 7:15:00 PM
Great limerick! Easier to read than do.
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Date: 6/23/2010 6:03:00 PM
Great testimony of your faith..Should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Mom
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Date: 6/23/2010 9:16:00 AM
A wonderful entry if you are in for the contest
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Date: 6/23/2010 8:29:00 AM
Great and true write Doris....good luck in the contest.....Larry
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