Doris Culverhouse Poet Limerick

For John Freeman: Godly Limerick

Look at me; I am so successful!
I am nothing save for Jesus' blood!
Have no god before Me
Love God first then your neighbor
If you love Me, serve widows and orphans.

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Katherine Stella June 26, 2010 at 7:53 AM wtg on this win well deserve and you sure picked moses as a good topic lol great imagery me still smiling keep up the great writing also thanks a bunch on your kind comment on my poem hugs

Andrea Dietrich June 25, 2010 at 8:34 PM VERY good, Doris, and congratulations.

Carol Sunshine Brown June 25, 2010 at 11:18 AM Congratulations Doris on your win in John Freeman's contest "Human Foible vs Godly Nature". Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor June 25, 2010 at 5:14 AM Congrats, Doris. Great write. You and yours have a great weekend. xxxRalph

Joyce Johnson June 24, 2010 at 11:13 PM Congratulations Doris on your fine Godly limerick and win. Love, Joyce

John Freeman June 24, 2010 at 10:17 PM Congratulations Doris on a fine presentation. That is what pure religion is, hu, Doris! Let us remember to do our alms, and not before men. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson June 24, 2010 at 5:30 PM Great words. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for uyour comments on "Sweet Happening" Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire June 24, 2010 at 12:54 PM Yes, God wants us to share love and offer compassion to everyone. Very spiritually uplifting entry for John's contest. I think he'll really enjoy this limerick. Wonderful work! Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop June 24, 2010 at 4:12 AM Well written Limerick and best of luck if it was for the contest, Doris...Gert

Marie Harrison June 23, 2010 at 7:15 PM Great limerick! Easier to read than do.

Sara Kendrick June 23, 2010 at 6:03 PM Great testimony of your faith..Should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Mom

Dr.Ram Mehta June 23, 2010 at 9:16 AM A wonderful entry if you are in for the contest

Larry Belt June 23, 2010 at 8:29 AM Great and true write Doris....good luck in the contest.....Larry