For I Can Hear Life

When our once young selves 
turn stale
and old and old and old, 
then in that beauty 
I still see, I can hear life...
I can hear life 
as it calls out 
its love song--
its plaintive plea 
to my ageless soul.

And when death makes 
its awkward entrance,
my soul, sudden cut adrift 
from its moorings, 
will carry that beauty, 
that beauty of a life lived,
with all its loves 
and all its joys 
and all its tears
to the next world, 
to the next beautiful,
resplendent dream.

For I can hear life....


12/28/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 6, 2024 at 1:44 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Carber Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 2:16 PM
Thank you, Silent One
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January 6, 2024 at 7:32 AM
L. J., I am moved by the jubilant tone of this uplifting WINNING poem. CONGRATS! Janice
Carber Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 11:43 AM
Thanks Janice, I'm glad you like it!
Alex Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 10:20 PM
Great concept. Beautifully expressed. Congratulations!
Carber Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 2:25 PM
Thank you!!!
Seeker Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 7:09 PM
So soothing, optimistic and soul uplifting! Congrats on your win, Carber!
Carber Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 2:26 PM
Thank you, U.S.
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March 20, 2020 at 12:18 AM
LJ, Congratulations on your HM. I like the movement of this poem.
Carber Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 10:27 AM
Thanks Sam--and may you and yours go with God, especially in these scary times....
Gauthier Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 9:02 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, LJ.
Carber Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 8:19 AM
Thank you, my friend
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 2:50 PM
WOW...stunning emotions are felt when reading this first place winning poem! This beauty is going into my faves L.J. Congratulations on your deserving top win! : )
Carber Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 7:29 AM
Thank you Connie-- you're making me blush!!!
Dietrich Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 1:34 PM
Beautiful, LJ. Congrats on the win.
Carber Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 7:30 AM
Thanks Andrea!
Barden Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 12:35 AM
Lovely piece, LJ - enjoyed it very much! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - wonderful work! :-)
Carber Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 3:59 PM
Thanks Gregory!
La France Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 7:14 PM
LJ, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest !
Carber Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 4:00 PM
Thank you, Broken Wings!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2017 at 9:58 PM
An ageless soul, indeed! Congrats!
Carber Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 2:57 PM
Thank you, Kim!
Green Avatar
December 28, 2016 at 5:24 PM
What a great outlook on life and getting older. This was fantastic Len. Nicely expressed.
Carber Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 1:34 PM
Thank you Chris-- your kind words of appreciation mean a lot to this old poet!
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