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Poem to be read with Picture Number 2 (boy on boat) For Him In the midst of a simpler time A boy and his boat set a-sail. Anchored in dark, murky waters Fishing gear, picnic lunch, and a pail As he baited the hook, his zest grew Underwater, the line disappeared. Waiting patiently, eager with hope The boy stared in case anything neared. From the shore, mud-smeared friends queried why The boy chose to spend this day alone. Most times, the lad fished with his daddy They’d watched him learn how as he’d grown. But as dawn woke the weary that day The boy had been struck with the news While he slumbered, his daddy’s soul passed Full of shock, he had no time to lose. So, transfixed to the surface, he stared For his father, his hero, he prayed A ripple...a tug...the boy smiled… Through his tears, he showed Dad who he made! Won First Place!!! Written on November 11, 2021

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Date: 12/18/2021 12:47:00 PM
This reminds me of the fishing trips with my father when I was a kid, and I too now fish alone. This has touched my heart, Meghan, nicely done. John
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Meghan Hutchings
Date: 12/19/2021 11:54:00 PM
John, thank you for your kind remarks. I'm glad you were able to make a connection with my poem, albeit a bittersweet one. I can only imagine how proud your dad is of the man you are today. Thank you for touching my heart, too. God Bless!
Date: 11/18/2021 3:38:00 PM
such a touching piece, many congrats on your win Meghan:-) hugs Jan x
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Meghan Hutchings
Date: 11/24/2021 4:47:00 AM
Thank you, Jan! I truly appreciate your kind words!!
Date: 11/15/2021 1:53:00 PM
wow, this is quite a story So touching. Congrats you did the theme so well.
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Meghan Hutchings
Date: 11/24/2021 4:49:00 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea! It means a lot to hear positive comments on my work! I'm very hard on myself, and I never did capture the last line the way I wanted, but I'm glad the story still came through!
Date: 11/15/2021 8:20:00 AM
Meghan, What an emotionally moving piece-beautiful, sad and deep. Congratulations on your win! Blessings, Paulette
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Meghan Hutchings
Date: 11/24/2021 4:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, Paulette! Dealing with all that I am at the time, this win brought great joy to me, like a very welcome rainbow through my ongoing storm. Your words are, as well, so thank you, again!
Date: 11/15/2021 7:43:00 AM
Meghan, your poem is truly beautiful and so emotional, I love it and congratulations on your win ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
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Meghan Hutchings
Date: 11/24/2021 4:55:00 AM
Constance, I greatly appreciate your kind and generous words! Thank you for making me feel as though my poem did evoke emotion! Love and blessings!
Date: 11/15/2021 5:06:00 AM
Beautiful write with emotions running deep, Congrats on your win Meghan
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Meghan Hutchings
Date: 11/24/2021 4:57:00 AM
Thank you very much, Joseph! It's pretty easy for me to write emotional poetry right now because I feel quite filled to the rim with emotion, I also know and pray that "this, too, shall pass". You kind words lighten my load!
Date: 11/15/2021 12:27:00 AM
This is a heart-warming write that tugs at the hearts of the readers, excellently penned, Meghan, congratulations:)
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Meghan Hutchings
Date: 11/24/2021 5:10:00 AM
Thank you for saying that, Jo. My goal when writing and teaching writing is to always evoke emotion from the reader. That's what I feel effective authors do. I appreciate you making me feel as though I did that here!
Date: 11/15/2021 12:05:00 AM
Meghan, this was so sensitively written and really pulled at the heartstrings. I'm sure you are enjoying every minute you can with your Dad and I know he's so proud of you and blessed to have a daughter like you. Congrats on your win ~ John
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Meghan Hutchings
Date: 11/24/2021 5:15:00 AM
John, your beautifully written congratulatory response made me cry!! Thank you so much for taking the time to write such a personal note! That was so thoughtful and considerate of you. You are definitely right about one thing; I don't take a second for granted with loved ones anymore! Love, blessings, and Happy Thanksgiving!
Date: 11/14/2021 10:22:00 PM
Great win. The accent on emotions is very well displayed. Well done.
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Meghan Hutchings
Date: 11/24/2021 5:17:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! I was hoping to "tug" (no pun intended) on a few heartstrings! As I've mentioned before, I believe effective authors should evoke some type of emotion in the reader. Thank you for your kind words!
Date: 11/14/2021 8:43:00 PM
Truly a wondrous rendering and well-said message, Meghan, your dad is in our prayers as are you and your loved ones, blessings always, Aloha!
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Meghan Hutchings
Date: 11/24/2021 5:22:00 AM
William, thank you, from the bottom of my heart, for your beautiful words and prayers. You, too, have moistened my eyes with tears through your reminder of the beauty and goodness in humankind. I needed that! Love and blessings!
Date: 11/14/2021 8:01:00 PM
Megham I applaud you, wonderful doesn’t do this poem justice, perhaps FANTASTIC does. Love it, congratulations on your win in Eves’s contest… Belle (Have just read what’s you’ve said about your dad and will include you both in my prayers.)
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Meghan Hutchings
Date: 11/24/2021 5:25:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Belle! Your kind and comforting words and prayers will help make this Thanksgiving special! I truly appreciate the beauty in your heart! (By the way, I love your name!) Love and blessings!
Date: 11/14/2021 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Meghan. Hugs Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/14/2021 7:29:00 PM
My prayers are with you and your dad..
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Meghan Hutchings
Date: 11/14/2021 6:18:00 PM
Thank you so very much! You truly made my week with this win! As my own daddy may not have much time left, I still live for the moments when he tells me how proud I make him!
Date: 11/11/2021 7:07:00 PM
Meghan that is very beautiful and heart touching indeed. Love it. Debx
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Meghan Hutchings
Date: 11/14/2021 6:20:00 PM
Thank you, Deb! I truly appreciate your kind words! It means a lot that you took the time to read and respond to my work! God bless! -Meghan

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