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For France


Oh, it was a dark November evening,
that the innocent lay dead and dying,
some taken hostage.
Enjoying the evening so unaware,
of brain-washed terrorist who had no care,
for deathly carnage.

Forever in prayers and memory,
at Bataclan shooters had no mercy,
even at cafe's.
Suicide bombers at the Stade de France,
the city of Paris is in a trance,
and survivors pray.

_____________________
November 23, 2015

Rime Couee - Tail Rhyme

For the contest, Rime Couee- Tail Rhyme Verse - For France,
Sponsor, Debbie Guzzi

Fourth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 2:26 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your awesome win. LINDA
La France Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 4:24 PM
Thank you Linda
Merryman Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 2:27 PM
Constance, your precise and compact descriptions pack an emotional punch. The last two lines sums it up well! Congrats on your placement! Love, Kim
La France Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 12:43 AM
Kim, thank you so much for that comment and for the congrats, appreciate !
A  Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 10:10 AM
BROKEN. CONGRATULATIONS on your win. HugS *SKAT*
La France Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 1:01 PM
Thank you Skat
Wigley Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 6:23 AM
Well written, Bw, well done. Viv x
La France Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 9:09 AM
Viv, thank you so much for the visit, appreciate ~
Guzzi Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 8:03 PM
Full of caring & strong emotion. Congrad's on your winning entry. Light & Love
La France Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 9:10 AM
Thank you so much Debbie for my wonderful placement, I am deeply honored ~
Salehi Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Congratulations
La France Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 12:19 PM
Pashang thanks for the congratulations, appreciate ~
Parker Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 6:53 PM
Sadness piercing a broken heart, from the evil that entered their lives...
La France Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 5:31 PM
Frederic, thanks for visiting my poem, oh yes the sadness is terrible and heartbreaking ~
Meade Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 3:22 PM
a wonderful tribute, may we never forget.
La France Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 5:32 PM
Thanks David, for visiting and commenting, appreciate ~
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