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Oh, it was a dark November evening, that the innocent lay dead and dying, some taken hostage. Enjoying the evening so unaware, of brain-washed terrorist who had no care, for deathly carnage. Forever in prayers and memory, at Bataclan shooters had no mercy, even at cafe's. Suicide bombers at the Stade de France, the city of Paris is in a trance, and survivors pray. _____________________ November 23, 2015 Rime Couee - Tail Rhyme For the contest, Rime Couee- Tail Rhyme Verse - For France, Sponsor, Debbie Guzzi Fourth Place

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Date: 1/9/2016 2:26:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your awesome win. LINDA
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Date: 1/9/2016 4:24:00 PM
Thank you Linda
Date: 1/5/2016 2:27:00 PM
Constance, your precise and compact descriptions pack an emotional punch. The last two lines sums it up well! Congrats on your placement! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/6/2016 12:43:00 AM
Kim, thank you so much for that comment and for the congrats, appreciate !
Date: 1/4/2016 10:10:00 AM
BROKEN. CONGRATULATIONS on your win. HugS *SKAT*
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Date: 1/4/2016 1:01:00 PM
Thank you Skat
Date: 1/4/2016 6:23:00 AM
Well written, Bw, well done. Viv x
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Date: 1/4/2016 9:09:00 AM
Viv, thank you so much for the visit, appreciate ~
Date: 1/3/2016 8:03:00 PM
Full of caring & strong emotion. Congrad's on your winning entry. Light & Love
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Date: 1/4/2016 9:10:00 AM
Thank you so much Debbie for my wonderful placement, I am deeply honored ~
Date: 1/3/2016 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations
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Date: 1/3/2016 12:19:00 PM
Pashang thanks for the congratulations, appreciate ~
Date: 11/23/2015 6:53:00 PM
Sadness piercing a broken heart, from the evil that entered their lives...
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Date: 11/24/2015 5:31:00 PM
Frederic, thanks for visiting my poem, oh yes the sadness is terrible and heartbreaking ~
Date: 11/23/2015 3:22:00 PM
a wonderful tribute, may we never forget.
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Date: 11/24/2015 5:32:00 PM
Thanks David, for visiting and commenting, appreciate ~