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For Darren

Some people you meet ...

Creep their way into your being
Like a kitten chasing shadows and dust
The pounce FAR more important than the prey
Little bits of things ephemeral

Intangible emotions and markers
That mean little in-and-of themselves
But all-in-all have a life, recombinant
And a spirit abiding ... gracious.

Quietly, gently, step-by-step
They climb the spiral to your heart's keep
No hurry, for the sake of surety
And without pretense

So you'll know JUST who they are
And not mistake the glint of their character and care.
'Tis a steady and pure ascent
For they are of integral station and sincerity

Honoring kindness and truth and love
And attending candor as the treasure YOU do.
Oh, a special place awaits them at the top of the stair
A soft, deep seat in the sun

Where a person can warm their heart with conversation
And where two friends can talk all things poetic
In the quiet corners of the day.
You are locked away in that roundtower, my friend

And whatever this life may bring
I shall wait patiently for that chat
Rain or sun, the tea shall be hot
And the words will find themselves ...

In good company.





~ 3rd Place ~  in the "Pick A Friend On Soup" Poetry Contest, Bobby May, Judge & Sponsor.

( For one of the best poets and best people I've ever met at Poetry Soup )
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Liguori Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 1:19 PM
What a beautiful tribute. There should only be time for good things in life.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 7:42 PM
Strawberries, tea and poetry! A delightful picture to go with this splendid poem Greg! Darren has a heart of gold. His inner light is evident in everything he writes. His warmth and genuine love of humanity draws people to him like a magnet. His kindness in his generous comments makes everyone feel special. Your tribute is a celebration of the unconditional love he shares. I miss him and hope he returns really soon. Congratulations on your win Greg. Your tribute is lovely! xxoo
Roper Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 6:24 PM
Congratulations, Gregory, on your win in the contest with this wonderful tribute poem! Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 4:58 PM
wow, such a beautiful tribute, buddy! I wish we saw more of him too. This deserves a fave!
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 7:14 AM
- Friendship is the wine of life, Gregory ... lovely win poems to Darren, congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 6:59 AM
Darren was one of my best friends on this site. There was no one kinder or more supportive than he was. I miss him around here but I do get to chat with him every now and then. he was a special person and a gifted poet
May Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 6:17 AM
Congratulations on your placement
White Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 12:45 PM
I am here. Greg :)
Barden Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 10:51 PM
Glad you're back, Buddy! :-)
Daniel Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 8:31 AM
Lovely tribute, Greg, to a kind person, congratulations on POTD:)
Barden Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Thank you so much, Jo - very pleased you liked it! :-)
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 5:18 PM
This poem is truly a wonderful gift for a beautiful and very talented friend. Blessings to you Darren! Congratulations on having this lovely tribute honored for POTD Greg. : )
Barden Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 11:42 PM
Thank you so very much, Connie - he is a good man, and worthy of some tribute, just for the smile he brings to others. Blessings, friend! :-)
White Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 11:16 AM
Oh wow, Greg, I'm so honored, and teary-eyed :) And I am awake again buddy :) <3 We speak soon.
Barden Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 11:40 PM
Oh, Buddy - great news!! Really happy to have you back, and I hope my little poem brought a smile ... blessings, friend, and quick healing and recovery - we shall talk soon! :-)
Smith Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 8:06 AM
Lovely sentiments for a warm caring member of our family only fitting it should be honored as POTD, congratulations Gregory...
Barden Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 11:38 PM
You are very kind, Charlie - thank you very much, my friend! :-)
Andresen Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 7:44 AM
- Congratulations with your lovely and touching p.o.t.d., Gregory - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Barden Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 11:38 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise - I greatly appreciate the kind words, my friend! :-)
Allison Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 5:43 PM
Darren is a gifted young man and inspirational to many on soup - a lovely tribute Greg and well worthy of POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
Barden Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 12:03 AM
He is indeed, and we are so lucky to call him our friend ... hoping for the best for him! Blessings and thanks, Jan - you're pretty great yourself! :-)
Pett Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 4:37 PM
A wonderful tribute for a great poet and friend, congratulations at achieving POTD with this well written poem Gregory. :))
Barden Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 12:02 AM
Thank you so very kindly, Roy - here's hoping we get our friend back soon, and with improved quality of life ... he deserves it! Blessings, friend! :-)
Ella Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 4:05 PM
A beautiful poem <3 I love the last line!! Congratulations Greg on the POTD :)
Barden Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 12:01 AM
Very kind of you to say so, Sara - than you so much, my friend! :-) <3
Michael Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 4:02 PM
Well done...Congratulations
Barden Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Arturo!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 2:14 PM
Friendship and good conversation warm the soul and that is well said in this poem. You have such a gifted talent with free verse and everything else. A model for all poets.
Barden Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM
You are much too kind, Janis ... and I love you for it! Blessings to you, my friend ... I have been so blessed with friendship here at the Soup, you and Darren two of the nicest! Thank you so! :-)
Warrior Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 12:56 PM
A beautiful poem for our wonderful poetic soul brother...may our vibes in friendship help him with a speedy recovery...and congrats! on POTD Mr. Greg...amazing write my brother...god bless the both of you...^WW^
Barden Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 11:58 PM
Amen - here's hoping our Bud is back soon, and that his quality of life is improved! Thank you, friend! :-)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 11:01 AM
Beautiful friendship tribute, Greg. A most worthy POTD shared, no doubt w/the person at the top of the spiral staircase. Pure poetry. Love and smiles always.
Barden Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 11:57 PM
Very kind of you, Freddie - thank you so much, Brother! :-)
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November 11, 2017 at 8:48 AM
I liked this
Barden Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 11:55 PM
Thank you so much!
Y. Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Hi Greg, This is a heartfelt tribute to an amazing person. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Barden Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 11:54 PM
Really awesome that a poem for D was selected for POTD ... put a smile on my face, and hopefully his, too! :-)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 7:03 AM
Back with congratulations Greg :) hearts gather for a speedy recovery <3
Barden Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 11:54 PM
Amen ... thanks so much, Mo - so cool that this one was selected - awesome surprise and a happy end to the day! :-) <3
Williams Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 6:52 AM
Congrats on the POTD Greg. A fitting tribute to a very deserving person in Daren - we all wish him a swift recovery...Maria
Barden Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 11:53 PM
Amen - well-said, Maria - he is very deserving of our well wishes! I heard from his sis and he is doing well, but not able to write at present. :-)
Downing  Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 6:26 AM
A beautiful tribute to Darren, and congrats on POTD... hugs :)
Barden Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 11:51 PM
Thank you so much, Akkina ... he is such a good person and friend to many of us here! I heard from his sister and he is doing ok! :-)
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