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For Dad

Their words are threadbare They unravel in my mind My thoughts are black smoke And no that ain’t good, but at least they can flow out of here I find no comfort, No comfort in their pity Where are you now? And is it nice there? For now I’ll see you in my dreams Keep you in my thoughts Cherish your memory Visit your grave

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/15/2010 10:49:00 AM
wow this is a very sad poem here but a good one i am very sorry that you have lost your father i have lost mine in many ways but not like this. so sorry and i really loved this poem it is true feelings. =)
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Date: 10/15/2009 2:39:00 PM
Please accept my sympathy for your loss. Nice tribute to your Dad. I'm glad you are cherishing your memories. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Karen
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Date: 10/15/2009 7:41:00 AM
I liked it, nice work. Your message was clear. I look forward to seeing what else you have to offer
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Date: 10/15/2009 3:32:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Hannah. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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