For Charlie Smith: Paradise Lost and Human Nature
SENRYU dedicted to Charlie Smith: May 7, 2017.
idyllic orchard
many fruit trees – but a tenth –
His tithe, we stole, ate
Adam and Abel
saw life and blood sacrifice
Cain gave God veggies
we bribe God on terms
we choose - one Son loved Father -
we nailed sins on Him
what love is this LORD
You paid for disobedience
with BLOOD of Jesus
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