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Hello Kyle It's been a while, I miss your smile :) CayCay? Life has these habits, it grows on us With tentacles we never asked for In ways we never wanted, but we have no choice But late at night when all is dark allusions of grandeur in star- and moonlight, sing serenades of connections through the distance, a hand reaches out to say: here, here I am Kyle, I'm still the same I love to play a game And if I lose? Such a shame! Wind carries voices, and sometimes longing More often friendship through ages What is age anyway? So if you find me on the beach looking upward Smile back and glide down that rainbow That is there, always, even though sometimes hidden behind clouds and rain Kyle, next time you are free you will see A mail, from me

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Date: 2/19/2017 11:28:00 PM
Lovely poem, Darren. Your poems for friends are the best gifts as they come from your heart. <3
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Darren White
Date: 2/20/2017 12:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, my dear friend <3
Date: 2/19/2017 9:57:00 PM
I see this printed out and hung on his wall, where I shall always gladly pause to read your words again. That we cross your mind, is a gift, that we stay and linger enough to inspire your pen, is like magic sailing across my heart. You have touched me. You are love, Darren, and in the sharing of your love, we are blessed. Hugs ... CayCay FAV 7
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Darren White
Date: 2/19/2017 11:26:00 PM
Of course you cross my mind! HUGS to you, all three of you, and give my love to Kyle, thanks for 7 and fav :)
Date: 2/19/2017 9:53:00 PM
I have watched the cursor blink, my mind unable to grasp any of the emotions rolling and soaring in me at this moment. To say I am touched is an understatement. There is an ethereal beauty to this that is a caressing and caring touch from across the ocean, yet a touch, untouched by distance. I am awed. Just saw your message. Kyle's asleep, but tomorrow he'll be right here, on this page and I know he'll be smiling. Going to Part 2
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Darren White
Date: 2/19/2017 11:25:00 PM
CayCay :) I am so happy you found it, I wasn't sure if you had internet access, or possibility to :) I hope Kyle loves it too!
Date: 2/19/2017 9:51:00 AM
There's nothing better to read than something written from the heart Darren which I'm sure this is, lovely tribute.
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Darren White
Date: 2/19/2017 10:08:00 AM
It is indeed. Thank you, Roy :)
Date: 2/19/2017 8:06:00 AM
This is so beautiful - Loved it <3
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Darren White
Date: 2/19/2017 8:16:00 AM
I hope CayCay will love it too :)
Date: 2/18/2017 10:14:00 PM
See , see the stars? You shine bright no matter where you are!
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Darren White
Date: 2/18/2017 11:26:00 PM
:) That is such a kind thing to say Arthur, thank you!
Date: 2/18/2017 4:56:00 PM
Hi Darren. A lovely write for a friend, who i am sure will enjoy......Seren
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Darren White
Date: 2/18/2017 11:25:00 PM
Seren, thank you! I hope she will find it and like it :)
Date: 2/18/2017 12:00:00 PM
I know caycay will be very touched by your concern ..friendship is so precious especially at bad times in our lives:-) hugs Jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 2/18/2017 12:27:00 PM
Yeah, it is.... And although she doesn't read mail much these days, I hope she can have a look at Soup from time to time. Hugs, Jan :)
Date: 2/18/2017 9:46:00 AM
Very nice, Darren!
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Darren White
Date: 2/18/2017 9:49:00 AM
Kim, thank you!
Date: 2/18/2017 9:14:00 AM
This is strangely moving, Darren. I say strangely, because there's far more feeling in the poem than the words seem to bear. But then, that's practically the definition of poetry itself, isn't it?
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Darren White
Date: 2/18/2017 9:19:00 AM
Michael, you've absolutely nailed that. I am writing this for a Poetry Soup friend, and I am deliberately keeping ot 'woolly' :)
Date: 2/18/2017 9:02:00 AM
A great declaration.
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Darren White
Date: 2/18/2017 9:07:00 AM
Thank you, Richard :)
Date: 2/18/2017 7:51:00 AM
Terrific Darren...I'd like to know more of the back story
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Darren White
Date: 2/18/2017 8:01:00 AM
Thanks Tim :)

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