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For Another Day

Regreting over the past when the black ink will never wipe out Be happy here where we are in this circle of onest lies When we will look forward to tomorrow Live without illusions that will be better for others roofless Maybe is all faulth of the time which only our fire can save

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Darren White

Date: 9/22/2017 2:38:00 PM

Despite the fact that English is (just like for me) not your native language, you write well. I advise you to use a dictionary for words you are not sure of qua spelling. And I get the feeling that some lines are not exactly representing the meaning you'd like to give them. Example: "Live without illusions // that will be better for others roofless..... Good luck, Darren.

Jakov Asl
Date: 9/22/2017 3:08:00 PM

thaks i got to find one :P