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For Another Day

Regreting over the past 
when the black ink 
will never wipe out

Be happy here where we are
in this circle of onest lies

When we will look forward to tomorrow 

Live without illusions
that will be better  for others           roofless

Maybe is all faulth 
of the time which 
only our  fire can save

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Darren White

Date: 9/22/2017 2:38:00 PM

Despite the fact that English is (just like for me) not your native language, you write well. I advise you to use a dictionary for words you are not sure of qua spelling. And I get the feeling that some lines are not exactly representing the meaning you'd like to give them. Example: "Live without illusions // that will be better for others roofless..... Good luck, Darren.

Jakov Asl
Date: 9/22/2017 3:08:00 PM

thaks i got to find one :P