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''For All Eternity''

 
The rain the rain is falling down, in sleep His tomb is wet, so dark the stone, so cold And words are deep engraved, I weep and weep In stone the man I love, his death foretold I will love him for all time blissfully He calls in death he calls, his voice ice-cold This heart is yours for all eternity In the dark I hear his murmurs, he calls His tomb is wet, so dark the stone, so cold He lays beneath the soil and the sun falls He haunts my days and nights, my hand he holds My dark angel that will never get old A voice, a whisper, calling to me darkly In dreams he beckons from beyond so bold This heart is yours for all eternity I open the old gate, the rain drizzles His tomb is wet, so dark, the stone so cold The wind takes my long hair, the trees tremble I fear my love who will never get old I feel his wings fall over me ice-cold Kissing his dead lips so sweet and deeply His breath freezing, I weep for love untold This heart is yours for all eternity My tomb is wet, so dark the stone, so cold Do not weep for I am here endlessly I will never release you from my hold This heart is yours for all eternity _____________________________ April 8, 2015 Poetry/Ballade/ ''For All Eternity'' For the Standard contest, Not Your Average Ballade, sponsor Catie Lindsay, Judged 05/2015 Tenth Place
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Date: 5/9/2015 8:37:00 PM
Another sweet win Broken....Linda
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Date: 5/9/2015 7:17:00 PM
Congrats on your win my friend. Dark and deep this one, the loss epic, the emotions raw and profound! A7...
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Date: 5/9/2015 5:58:00 PM
Broken, congratulations LOVE SKAT :)
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Date: 5/9/2015 2:31:00 PM
Congrats Constance. I like the darkness here and it's soaking effect on the reader.
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Date: 5/9/2015 1:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,B.W.beautiful write. a 7 :~)
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Date: 4/9/2015 8:17:00 PM
this is striking Broken Wings... beautifully crafted.... :)!hugs!//olive eloisa
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Date: 4/9/2015 8:46:00 AM
This took my breath away, BW...so beautiful and flowing with so much emotion of the heart. It should do really well for the contest. 7+Fav. Hugs, Sandra
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