For a Vacuum Cleaner

You make my life so easy
sucking up the dirt and fluff,
hair that makes me quite queasy 
and all sorts of unmentionable stuff.
You never get tired or wheezy
and help when things get rough.
Or when I feel rather uneasy,
you show you’re always tough enough.

Theme 2
48 words
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Agustin Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 11:54 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Laurie Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 4:57 PM
Hello Alexander … really did a great job explaining a vacuum cleaner with the work involved - thank you Alexander - Lindsay
Blackie Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 2:36 AM
Thank you, Lindsay. An ode is supposed to praise the virtues of a person or object but I don't suppose my inanimate vacuum will appreciate that! Alez
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