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For a Vacuum Cleaner

We glide together clearing grime away
Along murky rooms, under thick rugs
I lean on your unconditional care,
Absorbing this debris of my life.

Never mind the uproar you bring
For the comfort shared is enough
Protecting me from filth and trash-
Dust-buster, now I can spa!



In Praise of the Ode Contest
Sponsored by Nette Onclaud
Oct 5, 2020

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Beata Agustin Date: 10/12/2024 12:06:00 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/16/2020 6:50:00 PM oh this is such a well deserved winner. Indeed an ode. Mine was not quite an ode as it should have been. BIG congrats. Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 10/16/2020 11:23:00 AM Very fun, Amelie. Time to hit the spa! Congratulations on your first place win! Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 10/16/2020 5:48:00 AM Cute Amelie. Well-deserved win. Congratulations! Linda Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 10/16/2020 4:41:00 AM Congrats :) Such a original ... God bless you Login to Reply

Krish Radhakrishna Date: 10/16/2020 3:55:00 AM very cleverly done and a well deserved win!! Congrats! Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/5/2020 11:22:00 AM Wonderful write amelie. Loved your lines...I lean on your unconditional care...Never mind the uproar you bring..A winning poem for sure! Login to Reply