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We glide together clearing grime away Along murky rooms, under thick rugs I lean on your unconditional care, Absorbing this debris of my life. Never mind the uproar you bring For the comfort shared is enough Protecting me from filth and trash- Dust-buster, now I can spa! In Praise of the Ode Contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud Oct 5, 2020

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Date: 10/12/2024 12:06:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 10/16/2020 6:50:00 PM
oh this is such a well deserved winner. Indeed an ode. Mine was not quite an ode as it should have been. BIG congrats.
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Date: 10/16/2020 11:23:00 AM
Very fun, Amelie. Time to hit the spa! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 10/16/2020 5:48:00 AM
Cute Amelie. Well-deserved win. Congratulations! Linda
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Date: 10/16/2020 4:41:00 AM
Congrats :) Such a original ... God bless you
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Date: 10/16/2020 3:55:00 AM
very cleverly done and a well deserved win!! Congrats!
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Date: 10/5/2020 11:22:00 AM
Wonderful write amelie. Loved your lines...I lean on your unconditional care...Never mind the uproar you bring..A winning poem for sure!
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