Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- For a Reason -

Joy of living should pulsate in your veins like blood
Joyous time is when spring laughs, expectations fulfilled
Creation of self delusion is boundless
You discover insecurity and admits uncertainty
An orchestra I play second fiddle
The limits are indifferent, discover opportunities
Unfamiliar fruits keep your cool
We climb the mountain trying to create order and safety
In myths pond I glimpsed an image of a slimy frog
Kiss it ~ you can try








22.04.2016
Sun :)

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Funom Makama April 30, 2016 at 2:41 PM I simply lack words and compliments for this fine piece and for this I say.... Blessed art thou whom pens a glorious piece with expressive lines and touching words... For the thee, I add to my profound group of favourites. A definite 7!

James Inman April 26, 2016 at 9:53 AM Nice write Sunshine. Go out and live life and create your own destiny. Anne-Lise Andresen April 27, 2016 at 4:25 AM - James, thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Sun :)

Casarah Nance April 26, 2016 at 8:35 AM Very adventurous and positive, I really like the opening line of joy of living pulsate in your veins like blood. we should all have that feeling all the time ! :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2016 at 8:48 AM - Casarah, thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Sun :)

Jan Allison April 25, 2016 at 2:28 AM beautiful metaphor and I aslo love the thought of spring laughing... the imagery of kissing a toad sure made me smile:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2016 at 8:47 AM - Jan, thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Sun :)

Anand Parmale April 24, 2016 at 9:27 PM Very unique way of finding joy of life...Lovely....Dear Anne Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2016 at 8:46 AM - Anand, thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Sun :)

Andrea Dietrich April 24, 2016 at 5:10 PM what a great metaphor for embracing new things, kissing that slimy frog. VERY unique and COOL poem, Sunshine. Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2016 at 8:45 AM - Andrea, thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Sun :)

Nette Onclaud April 24, 2016 at 4:00 PM intriguing me so, sunshine..great last line..huggs Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2016 at 2:39 AM No one is safe here "soup", dear Nette - The Copyright © is a false safety - "The fly" is still in the "soup" - hugs //Sun :) Nette Onclaud April 24, 2016 at 5:07 PM anne..hope you are well and safe!..happy day and love to ya!

Moon Flower April 24, 2016 at 9:27 AM What did happen to the image of a slimy frog then? Did anyone attempt to kiss the frog? ;) Nice one. Keep it coming, Sun. Hugs! Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2016 at 11:57 AM - ...... those who believe in fairy tales, will kiss the frog without considering it ....... beware.... it could be toxic !?! - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments,Moon Flower :) - hugs // Sun :)

Wilma Neels April 24, 2016 at 7:36 AM Enjoyed your write this afternoon Anne-Lise :) hope your weekend has been an awesome one! xxx Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2016 at 11:59 AM - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Wilma :) - hugs // Sun :)

Red Fiery April 24, 2016 at 2:16 AM What a beautiful work my dear... I have missed your poems ... 7/7. For this brilliant write:).. Hugs Red Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2016 at 6:42 AM - Thanks for nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, dear Red :) - hugs // Sun :)

Richard Lamoureux April 23, 2016 at 6:53 PM Ya gotta do what ya gotta do. Pucker up the next one just might be that elusive Prince! Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2016 at 6:41 AM - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Richard :) - hugs // Sun :)

Lenny Gazbowski April 23, 2016 at 5:10 PM A beautifully written piece. Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2016 at 6:36 AM - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Lenny :) - hugs // Sun :)

Anwer Ghani April 23, 2016 at 4:50 PM The words of the text wave between direct letter and symbolic inspiration . This technique make the poem touch the deep points in soul . Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2016 at 6:39 AM - Thank you for interpreters and comments my poems, Anwer :) - hugs // Sun :)

Joseph May April 23, 2016 at 3:04 PM Wonderful write Sunshine Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2016 at 6:36 AM - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Sun :)

Bl Devnath April 23, 2016 at 3:02 PM Extremely beautiful. A truth of life. Loved always my lovely lovely friend. +7+. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2016 at 6:35 AM - Thanks for nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, dear Bl :) - hugs // Sun :)

Demetrios Trifiatis April 23, 2016 at 7:36 AM Profound dear Sunshine Smile! A lovely message wrapped in fine verse! Anne-Lise Andresen April 23, 2016 at 8:50 AM - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - Happy weekend, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Sun :)

Gary Bateman April 22, 2016 at 6:19 PM Dear Anne-Lise, A ravishing and quite compelling write. One never knows what might happen when one kisses " . . . a slimy frog." Maybe the result will both marvelous and magical. We can only hope so. Great Work. TR/FAV. Best!! Gary Anne-Lise Andresen April 23, 2016 at 8:44 AM - I do not believe in magic ....... not until I get it proven - But hope and dreams are there always, dear friend Gary - Appreciated a TR/FAV., thanks :) - hugs // Sun :)

Tim Smith April 22, 2016 at 3:01 PM I will give that frog a kiss :)....such a happy poem A-L....have a great weekend Anne-Lise Andresen April 22, 2016 at 4:21 PM - Do you dare, kiss the frog Tim :)? - I'm too old to believe in fairy tales :) - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments - Happy weekend my friend :) - hugs // Sun :)