For a Gentle Soul

I listen to the silence of the twinkling stars, as they slowly fade in the early morning light. Past misty mushroom crinoline clouds Dawn winks through breathy eyelashes blowing each tiny candle flame out. Like dreamy silhouettes cast long against the darkening ominous shadows, to face another day seems but wasted human sorrow. Then, through the gloom, sweet, like viscous dripping honey, your words so tenderly sooth my anxious mind. Your wit so quick, so wise, so funny, brightens the dark of the gloomiest night. With your gentle caress I feel new found warmth and look upon the awakened face of a brightened sunrise once again seeing the promise of my heart’s desire as your warm shaft of healing light starts to mend my broken heart.
09/01/2017
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Breidenthal Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 2:43 PM
Very beautifully descriptive work! I really like "Past misty mushroom crinoline clouds"..and "to face another day seems but wasted human sorrow." The ending of course is so uplifting...It's been really nice to read some more work on your page, James. Always, Laura
Inman Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 7:08 AM
This was written for someone who has given me encouragement through a difficult moment. Thank you again Laura.
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September 5, 2017 at 4:19 PM
Utterly beautiful and I just love it :)
Inman Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 9:48 PM
Thank you for your many lovely visits tonight Akkina.
Smith Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 10:19 AM
Sweet soft passion flows from your words James, so very well done...
Inman Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 1:09 PM
Thanks for the kind comment Charlie.
Tor Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 1:47 PM
James loved the way you tied so cleverly the emotions and the clouds, sunrise, viscous dripping honey mixed together to convey true feelings. Very difficult to do and you have done this flawlessly. Truly a unique and inspiring piece of literature.
Inman Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 8:53 AM
I'm not sure I'm deserving of your great comments Michael, but I admit I find pleasure in reading them.
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 6:03 PM
wow, Ralph, this is a pearl!! So sweet and precious the words. Wish I could see more, but I am already making myself late for an appt. Have a wonderful Labor day weekend, my friend.
Inman Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 11:50 PM
Thank you Andrea. I hope you enjoy your weekend as well.
Onclaud Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 4:18 PM
tenderly quilled igniting the glow of a heart's desire... very well done, james!,,huggs
Inman Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 11:49 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit Nette.
Lane Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 8:18 AM
This is truly seductive, James. You've even managed to set the alluring scene by personifying Dawn as a seductress as she, "winks through breathy eyelashes blowing each tiny candle flame out." Wonderfully penned.
Inman Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 8:50 AM
Thank you Lin. I wrote it for someone who has been very kind to me lately.
Sands Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 7:26 AM
Beautifully written James ! :)
Inman Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 8:41 AM
Thank you for your sweet comment Heidi.
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