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Footprints In the Snow

Footprints in the Snow I have followed all the footprints Left by turkeys in the snow All I wanted was to fit in With the flock of them I know But they’ve set a bad example Which has made it hard so I Can’t get off the beaten trail And teach myself to fly I have tried so many times To get ahead but I just fail Because I always stop to help All the turkeys on the trail I would love to be a leader But I’d have no peace of mind If my life kept getting better But I left a friend behind But there’s one thing I discovered That these turkeys do not know Is they’re walking in a circle Coming back to where they go So to try and make a difference I’ve stopped going with the flow And I have started making My own footprints in the snow By: Jeremy Siedlecki this poem is 24 lines i just couldnt do it proper in 20 i understand if this disquallifies me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/24/2011 5:58:00 AM
Jeremy,a belated congratulations to you in the contest of Gareth James "Inspirational". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/15/2011 5:19:00 PM
Apparently, you were not disqualified. Congratulations on your win in the contest.
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Date: 2/14/2011 6:35:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, jeremy
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Date: 2/13/2011 6:44:00 AM
Super congrats Jeremy on your wonderful win in the Inspirational contest with this beautiful entry luv... enjoy a super win ....
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Date: 2/13/2011 5:49:00 AM
a poet once said think outside the box. and he won a place in a certian contest. i think his name is rick and the contest was this one. forget the rules. this is a sure winner. congradulations. John H Loving III
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Date: 2/13/2011 12:27:00 AM
Don't you dare, stop making them Jeremy, this is a real beauty and congratulations on your win in Gareth's contest :)
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Date: 2/12/2011 2:52:00 PM
I am so glad that 4 lines didn't disqualify this delightful poem. I like it's rythm and its insightful message. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/12/2011 2:38:00 PM
well there YOU GO! not disqualified at all cause it was that GOOD! I never got that "go with the flow thing either LOL" I AM THE FLOW at least of my own stream ;) you too!! Congrad's Light & love
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