Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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Footprints

Step by step and side by side
In harmony like moon and tide
We walk together hand in hand
On sensually soft golden sand
Ocean blue sprays her fine mist
Memories of where we first kissed
Stretching far as the eye can see
Our footsteps follow you and me
Time and tides they pass us by
Oh how the days and years fly
Good times, bad times pass our way
Let’s cherish every single precious day

21st April 2015

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Milton Robertson April 25, 2015 at 8:53 AM That's a good thing. To cherish every day. A beautiful and Heart Felt poem Jan. Jan Allison April 25, 2015 at 11:17 AM Thanks Milton - having suffered heartache and such terrible loss over the last few years I cherish every day i wake up:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser April 23, 2015 at 12:51 PM Love this Jan, it's oozing loving emotions and feelings. I'd like to reciprocate Olive's comment, to experience one day ;-) hugs always//James xxx Jan Allison April 23, 2015 at 12:54 PM I am sure you will James:-) I am not very adept at romantic writes but I read some of Edwin's Hofert's poems and was inspired and really pleased with the comments I have had on this poem:-) Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 23, 2015 at 8:54 AM sweet so sweet!!! :) id like to experience this one day.. :)!//olive eloisa Jan Allison April 23, 2015 at 9:11 AM I am sure you will my friend:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich April 22, 2015 at 11:16 PM this is so lovely, Jan. Is it contest inspired or just one you came up with out of the blue!! Jan Allison April 23, 2015 at 2:18 AM Just inspired by reading some lovely poems by Edwin Hofert:-) Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance April 22, 2015 at 6:37 PM Aww what a positive and beautiful message, :) hugsxxx Jan Allison April 22, 2015 at 6:40 PM Thanks so much for all your support Cas:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne April 22, 2015 at 6:18 PM I just love this write Jan, it is one of my favorites. Jan Allison April 22, 2015 at 6:20 PM Thanks Armand you always know the right words to say my friend - you have boosted my spirits thank you:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez April 22, 2015 at 6:06 AM Simply flawless, Jan. Loved this romantic write on my most favorite place on earth as a setting! A 7. Hugs! Kim :) Jan Allison April 22, 2015 at 6:36 AM Thanks so much Kim- I was inspired by Edwin's romantic poems so I penned this:-) Hugs jan xx

Shane Cooper April 22, 2015 at 1:11 AM A beautiful poem Jan, the rhyme and alliteration flows so perfectly. The images so tender and loving. I think it is one of the best poems you have written. love Shane xxx Jan Allison April 22, 2015 at 4:00 AM Thanks Shane for that lovely comment:-) I have to go with the flow of my pen and i read some romantic poems written by edwin and I was inspired - am not particularly good at romantic poems - they don't come naturally to me:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nandita Das April 21, 2015 at 9:43 PM How beautiful...there's beauty in every line...I am reading this over and over again...#7 Jan Allison April 22, 2015 at 3:59 AM Thanks Nandita:-) Hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie April 21, 2015 at 8:24 PM G'day Jan... flows beaut, rhymes great and really matches the photo above. Well done - Lindsay Jan Allison April 22, 2015 at 3:58 AM Thanks so much Lindsay:-) Hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer April 21, 2015 at 5:51 PM this is wonderful, jan, especially the first 4 lines - killer! Jan Allison April 21, 2015 at 5:57 PM ***blushes*** thank you so much your comment has made my night:-) Hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight April 21, 2015 at 5:22 PM Very beautiful, Jan. Your words flow like a song, and the images are lovely. Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison April 21, 2015 at 5:24 PM Thanks Sandra I was pleased with the way this flowed:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Peranteau April 21, 2015 at 4:30 PM Infinitly beautiful dear poet ! TY for this delightful write today ! have a wonderrrrrful week........much love, james Jan Allison April 21, 2015 at 4:32 PM Thank you so much James:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton April 21, 2015 at 3:43 PM so charming Jan a wistful pen hugs 7 Jan Allison April 21, 2015 at 3:55 PM Thanks Shadow:-) I have to go where my muse takes me:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick April 21, 2015 at 3:11 PM Enjoyed reading your creative work..There is closeness and comfort in seeing a lifetime love affair..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Jan Allison April 21, 2015 at 3:22 PM Thanks for the lovely comment Sara:-)Hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser April 21, 2015 at 2:32 PM A beautiful poem that provides some great advice. Jan Allison April 21, 2015 at 2:37 PM I was inspired by Edwin Hofert's lovely poem so I had to get in on the act as I am an Island girl:-) hugs Jan xx

David Scott April 21, 2015 at 1:00 PM love it mate well written lovly ververse thankyou for your kind words on mine i still have a lot im reworking taking off then put back on like time space frien foe thoughts feelings ect just got so much going on at minute tired but please whatch this space i shell return to also read your beautiful work xxdavidscott Jan Allison April 21, 2015 at 1:49 PM Thanks for dropping by David lovely to see you again:-) hugs Jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka April 21, 2015 at 11:21 AM Very lovely jan! Both your words and the pictures. I was just going to come looking for my morning fix of your work when this popped up, and I'm glad it did. this left me feeling peaceful this morning. ~Jan Jan Allison April 21, 2015 at 11:27 AM aww thanks Janet I was inspired after reading some recent romantic works by Edwin Hofert and I wrote this last night:-) Hugs jan xx