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Step by step and side by side In harmony like moon and tide We walk together hand in hand On sensually soft golden sand Ocean blue sprays her fine mist Memories of where we first kissed Stretching far as the eye can see Our footsteps follow you and me Time and tides they pass us by Oh how the days and years fly Good times, bad times pass our way Let’s cherish every single precious day 21st April 2015

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Milton Robertson

Date: 4/25/2015 8:53:00 AM

That's a good thing. To cherish every day. A beautiful and Heart Felt poem Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/25/2015 11:17:00 AM

Thanks Milton - having suffered heartache and such terrible loss over the last few years I cherish every day i wake up:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 4/23/2015 12:51:00 PM

Love this Jan, it's oozing loving emotions and feelings. I'd like to reciprocate Olive's comment, to experience one day ;-) hugs always//James xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/23/2015 12:54:00 PM

I am sure you will James:-) I am not very adept at romantic writes but I read some of Edwin's Hofert's poems and was inspired and really pleased with the comments I have had on this poem:-) Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/23/2015 8:54:00 AM

sweet so sweet!!! :) id like to experience this one day.. :)!//olive eloisa

Jan Allison
Date: 4/23/2015 9:11:00 AM

I am sure you will my friend:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/22/2015 11:16:00 PM

this is so lovely, Jan. Is it contest inspired or just one you came up with out of the blue!!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/23/2015 2:18:00 AM

Just inspired by reading some lovely poems by Edwin Hofert:-) Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/22/2015 6:37:00 PM

Aww what a positive and beautiful message, :) hugsxxx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/22/2015 6:40:00 PM

Thanks so much for all your support Cas:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/22/2015 6:18:00 PM

I just love this write Jan, it is one of my favorites.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/22/2015 6:20:00 PM

Thanks Armand you always know the right words to say my friend - you have boosted my spirits thank you:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/22/2015 6:06:00 AM

Simply flawless, Jan. Loved this romantic write on my most favorite place on earth as a setting! A 7. Hugs! Kim :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/22/2015 6:36:00 AM

Thanks so much Kim- I was inspired by Edwin's romantic poems so I penned this:-) Hugs jan xx

Shane Cooper

Date: 4/22/2015 1:11:00 AM

A beautiful poem Jan, the rhyme and alliteration flows so perfectly. The images so tender and loving. I think it is one of the best poems you have written. love Shane xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/22/2015 4:00:00 AM

Thanks Shane for that lovely comment:-) I have to go with the flow of my pen and i read some romantic poems written by edwin and I was inspired - am not particularly good at romantic poems - they don't come naturally to me:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nandita Das

Date: 4/21/2015 9:43:00 PM

How beautiful...there's beauty in every line...I am reading this over and over again...#7

Jan Allison
Date: 4/22/2015 3:59:00 AM

Thanks Nandita:-) Hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/21/2015 8:24:00 PM

G'day Jan... flows beaut, rhymes great and really matches the photo above. Well done - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 4/22/2015 3:58:00 AM

Thanks so much Lindsay:-) Hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/21/2015 5:51:00 PM

this is wonderful, jan, especially the first 4 lines - killer!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2015 5:57:00 PM

***blushes*** thank you so much your comment has made my night:-) Hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/21/2015 5:22:00 PM

Very beautiful, Jan. Your words flow like a song, and the images are lovely. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2015 5:24:00 PM

Thanks Sandra I was pleased with the way this flowed:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Peranteau

Date: 4/21/2015 4:30:00 PM

Infinitly beautiful dear poet ! TY for this delightful write today ! have a wonderrrrrful week........much love, james

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2015 4:32:00 PM

Thank you so much James:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 4/21/2015 3:43:00 PM

so charming Jan a wistful pen hugs 7

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2015 3:55:00 PM

Thanks Shadow:-) I have to go where my muse takes me:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/21/2015 3:11:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative work..There is closeness and comfort in seeing a lifetime love affair..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2015 3:22:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Sara:-)Hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/21/2015 2:32:00 PM

A beautiful poem that provides some great advice.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2015 2:37:00 PM

I was inspired by Edwin Hofert's lovely poem so I had to get in on the act as I am an Island girl:-) hugs Jan xx

David Scott

Date: 4/21/2015 1:00:00 PM

love it mate well written lovly ververse thankyou for your kind words on mine i still have a lot im reworking taking off then put back on like time space frien foe thoughts feelings ect just got so much going on at minute tired but please whatch this space i shell return to also read your beautiful work xxdavidscott

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2015 1:49:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by David lovely to see you again:-) hugs Jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 4/21/2015 11:21:00 AM

Very lovely jan! Both your words and the pictures. I was just going to come looking for my morning fix of your work when this popped up, and I'm glad it did. this left me feeling peaceful this morning. ~Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2015 11:27:00 AM

aww thanks Janet I was inspired after reading some recent romantic works by Edwin Hofert and I wrote this last night:-) Hugs jan xx