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Footprints

I leave my footprints on the beach as my last impression, the ocean erases them as if I were never there

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Date: 7/24/2024 7:48:00 PM
ocean doesn't erase, it just kissed your footprints! happy beach writing.
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Karen Croft
Date: 7/25/2024 7:09:00 AM
Oh I love that! Thank you
Date: 7/24/2024 7:21:00 PM
Isn’t that something? A seaside etch a sketch!
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Karen Croft
Date: 7/24/2024 7:40:00 PM
I should have thought of that. Thank you!!
Date: 7/24/2024 6:45:00 PM
When we are young, we build sand-castles, also taken down with the incoming tide. Inevitably we return to our ancestral home, the water.
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Karen Croft
Date: 7/24/2024 7:41:00 PM
I agree completely

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