Footprints

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mama taught me not to drag my feet as i walk through the sands of time a thirsty soul might come looking and find their way to the watering hole ~ footprints

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Riquetta Brown

Date: 11/1/2022 12:41:00 PM

Beautiful poem!

Joseph May

Date: 2/8/2022 6:39:00 AM

A wonderful write Eshe, enjoyed

Millard Lowe

Date: 7/22/2021 9:03:00 AM

Wow! A strong allegorical message from the footprints of the lessons our ancestors have left us. Peace and Love.

Eshe Benson
Date: 2/8/2022 2:37:00 AM

Thanks Millard. And we also leave our footprints on the sands of time

David Drowley

Date: 7/20/2021 7:03:00 AM

Excellent write. Insightful. Keep posting!

Eshe Benson
Date: 2/8/2022 2:35:00 AM

Thanks David. I hope to do so

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/19/2021 3:15:00 PM

Ha ha ha, you have a clever mama.

Eshe Benson
Date: 2/8/2022 2:35:00 AM

?? the best Richard

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 7/19/2021 1:45:00 PM

This makes me think of when my mom told me not to let life pass me by.

Eshe Benson
Date: 2/8/2022 2:35:00 AM

Mom’s are the greatest, aren’t they? Some of course. Not all