Footles X 17

Small print Eyes squint Deep snow Tread slow Strong gales Drop sails Score high Bulls eye Great whites Big bites Dark rum Warms tum Thin hair Thread bare Small tent Legs bent Wide load Hogs road Strong cheese Bees knees Flash drive Archive Clear night Stars bright Peace dove Spreads love Suns heat Dead beat Earthquakes Ground shakes Shots rang Loud bang Just wed Now bed
Written 21st August 2020
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Date: 8/30/2021 4:28:00 PM
so good to read these again Tom, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/31/2021 3:06:00 AM
Thank you very much Jan, I don't have to tell you how addictive they are. Shame he's not doing any more contests. Back now, slogging in the kitchen. Tom
Date: 8/28/2021 7:11:00 PM
Great imagery , Tom, congratulations in your win in Brian's Footle contest. Hugs Eve
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/31/2021 3:03:00 AM
Thank you very much Eve, im happy you enjoyed them. Tom
Date: 8/28/2021 10:22:00 AM
Congrats, Tom, you are so clever with these, had fun re reading them!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/28/2021 10:48:00 AM
Thank you very much Michelle, I'm happy you enjoyed them second time around. Enjoy your weekend Tom
Date: 8/28/2021 10:04:00 AM
Back with congrats again, my friend!! it's Brian's last contest? I did not realize even though it said Footle Finale!!!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/28/2021 10:07:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea, yes I saw it was his last and what better way to go out with a form he created. Tom
Date: 8/25/2020 6:51:00 PM
You have mastered this form Tom...
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/25/2020 11:32:00 PM
Thank you Michael, glad you liked tbem. Hope you're well Tom
Date: 8/25/2020 2:56:00 PM
Ha!! That last one!! Congrats on your win with Brian.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/25/2020 3:24:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea, that last one I couldn't resist lol. Tom
Date: 8/24/2020 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. It was a fun write to read. Enjoy your win and day............
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/24/2020 10:48:00 AM
Thank you very much Paula, im pleased you liked it. Hope you too enjoy your day. Tom
Date: 8/24/2020 3:44:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/24/2020 4:02:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne for your congrats and return visit. Tom
Date: 8/23/2020 5:59:00 PM
G'day Tom ... fabulous footles indeed. I'm really knew to this genre and they certainly get straight to the point - thank you Tom - Lindsay
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/23/2020 8:33:00 PM
Thank you Lindsay, glad you liked them, it was Brian Strand a poet here on soup who created the form. Tom
Date: 8/23/2020 8:19:00 AM
Your footles are fabulous, Tom - I like the 'cheese/bees knees' the best!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/23/2020 8:31:00 AM
Thank you very much Michelle, its a form I enjoy doing. Never realised you could say so much with just four syllables. Tom
Date: 8/23/2020 6:29:00 AM
I LOVE these footles, and I am certainly going to try this style of poetry sounds like great fun. Well penned my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/23/2020 6:31:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer, a warning, they are very addictive once you start, the form was created by soups own Brian Strand. Tom
Date: 8/23/2020 4:50:00 AM
I simply adore this. It's a fave for sure. Love it :) Thank you for the morning joy, my friend. God bless you
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/23/2020 5:46:00 AM
Thank you Regina, you should give them a go, they're very addictive once you start. Hope you're well Tom
Date: 8/22/2020 2:57:00 PM
now this is a big treat, tom... love ypur footles ; the flash drive/ archive is so funny... keep up the fine work!... huggs
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 8/22/2020 3:17:00 PM
tom, i am sensing you a soupie!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/22/2020 3:04:00 PM
Thank you Nette im happy you enjoyed them. Enjoy your weekend Tom
Date: 8/22/2020 6:34:00 AM
A great creativity and a witty mastery of words of depth and meaning.. I thank you so much, Tom for introducing this new type of poetry! Very challenging and interesting! You always give something new to your reader.. so much delighted to read your beautiful and creative work.. Best regards and blessings.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/22/2020 7:59:00 AM
Thank you very much Besma, Im pleased that you enjoyed them. It was Brian here on soup that created the form. I hope you're well Tom
Date: 8/21/2020 8:11:00 PM
I LIKE THESE LITTLE STORIES, GOOD JOB!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/22/2020 1:45:00 AM
Thank you Timothy Tom
Date: 8/21/2020 2:05:00 PM
Great imagery in these tiny imprints--well done, Tom.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/21/2020 2:12:00 PM
Thank you very much Vijay, im pleased you liked them Tom
Date: 8/21/2020 1:12:00 PM
These are great Tom! I enjoyed them :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/21/2020 1:17:00 PM
Thanks very much Heidi, im pleased you liked them. Hope alls well. Tom
Date: 8/21/2020 12:56:00 PM
a solid line up here Tom. Thanks for the series of chuckles
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/21/2020 1:00:00 PM
Thank you very much John, im happy you enjoyed them. Tom
Date: 8/21/2020 12:50:00 PM
Love these Tom These are ones I cannot do. Footie - capped)))., I guess..,,Awww. I am also horrible at one liners. Don Ricles I am not. Pangie xx Not much fun, eh
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/22/2020 11:59:00 AM
Tom...I can be funny verbally, not on paper. I am fantastic in live humor but a dufus in writing it. Like, I don't like one liners. Comedians do that. I like humor when two or more go back and forth. But a Densoid on my own. Pangie...I have ride these...my results were BOO to me. Pangie xx
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/21/2020 1:00:00 PM
Lol, thanks Panagiota, give them a go, once you start you won't be able to stop. Tom
Date: 8/21/2020 12:18:00 PM
- I had to check ... (no footle contest) ... - This was really fun, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/21/2020 12:33:00 PM
Thank Anne, they're so addictive once you start, fun to do. They're not for any contest Tom
Date: 8/21/2020 12:09:00 PM
isn't it amazing how we both worked on this fun form today, great string of fun footles Tom:-) hugs jan xx
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/21/2020 12:32:00 PM
Thanks Jan, great minds lol. Tom
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