S.Jagathsimhan Nair Poet Footle

Footles Rattle 1

Footles Rattle

Far sky
So high
Hot sun
Not fun.
Naughty 
Haughty.
High price
New rise.
Top prize
Hopes rise.
Strong-willed
Long-grilled.
New ring 
News bring.
Don’t miss
Fond kiss.
Too shy
No try.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair
23rd jan 13

For Yasmin's 'Footle fun' contest

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Pandita Sietesantos October 24, 2014 at 11:18 AM This is such a clever write! I love it! I can see why you won with this witty piece! BRAVO! Pandita

Connie Gildersleeve February 10, 2013 at 7:41 AM Congrats on your grand win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Apoorva Patrikar February 9, 2013 at 9:49 PM nice one! congrats on your win!

Poet Destroyer A February 9, 2013 at 8:59 PM I love them Jag,, fun footles... congrats on your first place win.... very creative... LINDA

Kim Merryman February 9, 2013 at 6:39 PM Congrats on your fabulous 1st place win, Jag! Love, Kim

The Situation February 9, 2013 at 3:50 PM congrads

Tim Ryerson February 9, 2013 at 3:07 PM Clever and VERY funny 'Footles Rattle'...Congratulations - Tim

Debra Squyres February 9, 2013 at 12:11 PM Congrats on your win !!

Debbie Guzzi February 9, 2013 at 11:35 AM Congrad's on your fun win. Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich February 9, 2013 at 10:53 AM awesome win, jag,and I had not even seen this yet!! Congratulations.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 9, 2013 at 10:32 AM Congratulations on your first place in the contest,Jag. - Bravo! - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun February 9, 2013 at 9:38 AM Congratulations my dear friend SJ on your awesome win. I’ve truly enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you so much! Love/hugs, Leonora

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 9, 2013 at 8:00 AM Hi jag these are great congratulations well worth top spot xx

Seren Roberts February 9, 2013 at 7:57 AM well doneJag....,Seren

Richard Lamoureux January 27, 2013 at 8:28 AM I am glad you Tryed this poem. I am not familiar with the form but it is entertaining. Thanks for your visit and comment.

Jack Horne January 26, 2013 at 2:47 PM lol, love these footles - congrats on your wins, my friend

Vesna Kovrlija January 25, 2013 at 5:03 AM Lovely poem!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2013 at 2:56 AM A fun poem form footle and you've created a lovely poem,Jag. - Luck in contes. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Iveren Ikyembe January 23, 2013 at 12:26 PM Lovely lovely write!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 23, 2013 at 10:42 AM ha well done jag. love em hope they do well xx