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Footles Rattle 1

Footles Rattle Far sky So high Hot sun Not fun. Naughty Haughty. High price New rise. Top prize Hopes rise. Strong-willed Long-grilled. New ring News bring. Don’t miss Fond kiss. Too shy No try. S.Jagathsimhan Nair 23rd jan 13 For Yasmin's 'Footle fun' contest

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Date: 10/24/2014 11:18:00 AM
This is such a clever write! I love it! I can see why you won with this witty piece! BRAVO! Pandita
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Date: 2/10/2013 7:41:00 AM
Congrats on your grand win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/9/2013 9:49:00 PM
nice one! congrats on your win!
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Date: 2/9/2013 8:59:00 PM
I love them Jag,, fun footles... congrats on your first place win.... very creative... LINDA
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Date: 2/9/2013 6:39:00 PM
Congrats on your fabulous 1st place win, Jag! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/9/2013 3:50:00 PM
congrads
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Date: 2/9/2013 3:07:00 PM
Clever and VERY funny 'Footles Rattle'...Congratulations - Tim
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Date: 2/9/2013 12:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 2/9/2013 11:35:00 AM
Congrad's on your fun win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/9/2013 10:53:00 AM
awesome win, jag,and I had not even seen this yet!! Congratulations.
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Date: 2/9/2013 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place in the contest,Jag. - Bravo! - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/9/2013 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations my dear friend SJ on your awesome win. I’ve truly enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you so much! Love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/9/2013 8:00:00 AM
Hi jag these are great congratulations well worth top spot xx
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Date: 2/9/2013 7:57:00 AM
well doneJag....,Seren
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Date: 1/27/2013 8:28:00 AM
I am glad you Tryed this poem. I am not familiar with the form but it is entertaining. Thanks for your visit and comment.
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Date: 1/26/2013 2:47:00 PM
lol, love these footles - congrats on your wins, my friend
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Date: 1/25/2013 5:03:00 AM
Lovely poem!
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Date: 1/24/2013 2:56:00 AM
A fun poem form footle and you've created a lovely poem,Jag. - Luck in contes. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/23/2013 12:26:00 PM
Lovely lovely write!
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Date: 1/23/2013 10:42:00 AM
ha well done jag. love em hope they do well xx
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