Constance La France Poet Footle

Footle - Fabulous Fun Footles

The "Awkward" Dancer

Dancer,
prancer . . . 

Spinner,
winner . . .

Stumble,
jumble!

Hit wall-
did fall . . .

Red face,
disgrace!

Applause -
- then pause . . .

I bow,
somehow !

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March 19, 2017

Poetry/Footle/Fabulous Fun Footles
Copyright Protected, ID 03- 885-682-19
All Rights Reserved, 2017, Constance La France

Written for the Standard contest, Fabulous Fun Footles
Sponsor, Jan Allison, Judged 03/2017 

Second Place

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John Michaels April 20, 2017 at 6:32 PM This is hilarious - especially like the "Hit wall / Did fall" lines. Somehow this one slipped past me, so pleased to discover it now! Congratulations on your high-placed win! Regards, John.

Carole Duet April 7, 2017 at 10:46 PM P.S. Sorry, Broken Wings! I had just recently read something by Jan...but the comment was definitely for YOU.

Carole Duet April 7, 2017 at 10:42 PM So smart, Your art, Ever, Clever, Love to, Read you! Seriously, I love this, Jan. And, congrats on making the "Best New Poems" list. Not a surprise!

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2017 at 8:23 PM so cute seeing it again, and a well deserved win it was! BIG congrats, sweetie.

Alexis Y. April 1, 2017 at 8:46 AM Hi BW, Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis

Jan Allison March 31, 2017 at 6:12 PM A joy to read Constance its so lovely to see your fun side in this string of footles:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel March 27, 2017 at 9:56 AM Great set of footles, dear Constance :)

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2017 at 9:29 PM LOVE this, Constance. So cool how you did yours on something you enjoy so much like dance! SEVEN

Carol B. March 19, 2017 at 10:19 PM Lol I got a kick out of this piece:)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 19, 2017 at 6:17 PM Delightful little write! Will share with my man, he was a dancer, he will totally appreciate this gem :) xomo!

Tim Smith March 19, 2017 at 4:50 PM adore...encore