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Footle---Dangerous Eyes

Her rainbow eyes His own demise.

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Date: 5/2/2009 4:14:00 PM

Got a smile out of me with this clever poem. I enjoyed it. Much said in just two lines. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Karen

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/11/2009 5:27:00 AM

While it's not a true footle, it is a great write. Perfect rhyme and very clear. Michael

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/6/2009 12:32:00 PM

Excellent...I really like this one! ~ Love, Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/6/2009 12:00:00 PM

Love this piece..those eyes are killers.

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/6/2009 11:52:00 AM

Maryam this poem made me laugh - reckon it's because I have worn those very shoes - God Bless, MJ

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 2/6/2009 11:12:00 AM

fabulous wording but cut it down to 2 syllables in each line and give it a name: Déirdre