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wrote this poem while remembering my younger days as a competitive runner

FOOTFALLS

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Winter’s bite clings to the air, each footfall breaking the thin ice of morning. My breath unravels in ragged ghosts, disappearing into the gray dawn. Spring arrives—moist ground, and mud splattering on my calves. The ache in my lungs is suddenly green, filled with pollen and carefree birdsong. Summer sears the asphalt, melting the soles of my shoes. Rivers of sweat run down my spine. I spring through the fevered world, chasing the horizon and blue sky. Autumn arrives quietly; leaves are brittle underfoot. The wind tugs at my clothes like a lover who knows I’m leaving. I slow down, not because I'm tired but because the light is disappearing. Even the longest roads must turn homeward. If you enjoyed this poem, you may want to read its memoir vignette companion, Season to Season, posted here on Poetry Soup: poetrysoup.com/short_stories/season_to_season_13582
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Gauthier Avatar
February 7, 2026 at 7:19 AM
Lovely succession of seasonal vignettes ~
DiMino Avatar
January 27, 2026 at 5:51 AM
"The ache in my lungs is suddenly green," -- Marvelous expression. "I slow down, not because I'm tired but because the light is disappearing. Even the longest roads must turn homeward." -- Wonderfully spiritual! You get a FAV!
Hind Avatar
January 26, 2026 at 1:00 PM
a haunting run, <3
Etgen-Baker Avatar
January 26, 2026 at 5:45 PM
many thanks, hugs, sara
Parker Avatar
January 26, 2026 at 10:20 AM
to remember those days when the body and mind were one, and invincibility was a shield worn by the heart...my first thought after reading your poem
Etgen-Baker Avatar
January 26, 2026 at 5:45 PM
wow, thanks for sharing your thoughts....they are so applicable and true....especially the invincibility.
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