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Foot Passion

She brings to my desire her perfect infallible feet
I try to tickle her funny bone by rubbing her feet softly
All that succeeds is her passion for me increases tenfold 

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Nette Onclaud's "ON YOUR FEET" contest

1/26/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Puddifoot Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 4:51 PM
congrats on your contest win, liked this one the first time I read it, romantic and cute :-)
Poet Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 3:02 AM
Congrats on your win in Nette's win.Enjoyed your poem.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 2:39 AM
Congratulations and lucky you x
Sentes Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 6:36 PM
and Russell Sivey Jr. was born! Enjoyed this terribly! =D ahahaha! Congratulations, Sir!
Richards Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 5:36 PM
Ah, how romantic you are!! And creative with this winner!!
Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 3:47 PM
I agree with Bob, that sure is not a bad thing. BIG congrats to you. It was a great approach to the contest.
Quigley Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 11:18 AM
Well, that's not a bad thing. Congrats Russell
Sweetheart Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 9:20 AM
congrats Russell on this sizzling entry winning my friend.. feeling this passion completely..luv..
Brown Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 5:34 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "On Your Feet" contest Russell. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 10:36 PM
methinks a pussy cat, stopped by, where verse is at.... i have one...
Puddifoot Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 4:04 PM
well this one 'tickled' my fancy anyway, quite a passionate take on the theme, lucky lady :-)
Song Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 5:50 AM
oh,,...this is a toe tingler and a winner for sure..great humor and a perfect senryu. Gwendolen
Song Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 5:50 AM
perfect sijo
Onclaud Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 7:44 PM
feet foreplay, rusell!.. thanks for being part of my contest.. congrats on your win in my serenity spree..:) huggs!
Kendrick Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 4:52 PM
Cute one..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Reads like a winning work..That tickling her funny bone is a sure winner..Sara
Johnson Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 4:42 PM
interesting concept mate, tickled feet communicate, with passion....
Devonshire Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 4:37 PM
:) She may not be ticklish, Russell, but if her passion rises when you rub her feet, you must be a very romantic man. Excellent entry for Nette's contest. Winning wishes coming your way, my friend. Love, Carolyn
Ball Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 3:40 PM
Cute one Russ although never could understand the foot thing. I like my back rubbed. Good job my friend. God Bless, JB
Sweetheart Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 1:16 PM
oh my a hotter than hot image filled piece Russell.. good luck as Nedtte will enjoy this one for certain luv.. my oldest son has a Yorkie named Feona.. she is all of 5 pounds and is gold and brown with black tipped paws.. so cute.. and always with a bow in her locks too.. a real heart breaker.. haha.. sorry for u missing your dogge too .. they are so special to us ..
Pettit Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 11:05 PM
Does she get a kick out of having the soles of her feet rubbed? I have to check out this latest contest.
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