Fool's Gold

On the main floor of the bus station in the windy city,                                      I was being fooled, and my deceiver was going for the gold.
He was a con artist straight from the heartless streets of Chicago.
He spotted me long before I saw him, but I never saw him or ‘it’ coming.
I was an innocent naïve 17-year-old, straight from the Delta of Mississippi.
Where I was from, no one lurked, stalked, or skimmed to take advantage of me.

Like Eve in the Garden, I was alone,                                                        and an easy prey for anyone set an on evil deeds.
Like Eve, I was told what to do, but the deceiver                                      was much more clever, and twisted things around.

Also like Eve, I listened to the lie of another, and before I knew it,                   I was believing his words and handing him a five dollar bill.
He was a pretender, but I learned the hard way to discern                              the difference between the reality and make believe.

Fast forward nearly 30 years, and the picture looks very different.
By then, I had learned about a brassy yellow material that looked like gold.
On a hot summer’s day, on my delivery route, I took a break on a river bank.
I stood on the banks of The North Folk of The American River in California.       The clever deceiver was not human, but it sparkled and looked like the real deal.
I picked it up, and in a way I said, “You can’t fool me.  You are ‘fool’s gold.”
11162016 PS Contest, But It Was Not Real, Lewis Raynes. Pl 8th

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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