Fool's Gold

A thought of you, melted away
You became unreachable
Loss of words linger in the empty cave
Wind is howling at the entrance
Lonely, damp darkness engulfs me
A sliver of light is found between boulders
Water drips into ominous pools
I walk carefully to dodge them
Balancing on the slippery rocks
I can’t see you anymore
I can’t hear you anymore
Then, I see the sparkle below
It is reflecting what I thought you were
I reach down gingerly to pick it up 
Tears fall into the palm of my hand
Rolling off the discovery of fool’s gold

November 15, 2016

Heidi Sands

*Placed 4th in Contest - Fool's Gold
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November 27, 2016 at 8:02 AM
Hi Heidi, You penned a good write for the contest theme. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Sands Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 8:03 AM
Thank you Alexis. I appreciate your comment very much. :)
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November 26, 2016 at 8:19 PM
Great example of fool's gold. Good write with vivid imagery. Congratulations.
Sands Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:11 AM
Thank you Janis :)
Eldridge Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 12:45 PM
Nice-thanks-congrats!
Sands Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 12:53 PM
Thanks!
Canerdy Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 10:14 AM
A 7 for this truly excellent winning poem, Heidi! Janice
Sands Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 10:23 AM
Thank you Janice. I appreciate it :)
Martin Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 10:11 AM
Love the damp, windy cave imagery! Congrats! :-)
Sands Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 10:23 AM
Thanks Mark! :)
Smith Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 10:08 AM
Well done Heidi, congratulations...
Sands Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 10:23 AM
Thank you Charlie :)
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November 18, 2016 at 12:18 PM
A beautifully sad poem, Heidi. Well written w/some emotional punch. What's the periodic table sign for gold? Aah, don't bother. Love the poem though. Love always, my poetic friend.
Sands Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 12:26 PM
Thank you Freddie. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 6:59 PM
Haunting!
Sands Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 7:17 PM
I guess that poem for the contest had quite an impact!
Green Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 5:24 PM
Now this was sad, so much promise and need washed away in a moments time. Nicely expressed sadness Heidi.
Green Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 5:29 PM
I think you found a winner. :)
Sands Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Thanks Chris - was trying to find a theme for the Fool's gold contest .
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