Fool's Gold

A thought of you, melted away
You became unreachable
Loss of words linger in the empty cave
Wind is howling at the entrance
Lonely, damp darkness engulfs me
A sliver of light is found between boulders
Water drips into ominous pools
I walk carefully to dodge them
Balancing on the slippery rocks
I can’t see you anymore
I can’t hear you anymore
Then, I see the sparkle below
It is reflecting what I thought you were
I reach down gingerly to pick it up 
Tears fall into the palm of my hand
Rolling off the discovery of fool’s gold

November 15, 2016

Heidi Sands

*Placed 4th in Contest - Fool's Gold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 11/27/2016 8:02:00 AM
Hi Heidi, You penned a good write for the contest theme. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/27/2016 8:03:00 AM
Thank you Alexis. I appreciate your comment very much. :)
Date: 11/26/2016 8:19:00 PM
Great example of fool's gold. Good write with vivid imagery. Congratulations.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/27/2016 6:11:00 AM
Thank you Janis :)
Date: 11/26/2016 12:45:00 PM
Nice-thanks-congrats!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/26/2016 12:53:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 11/26/2016 10:14:00 AM
A 7 for this truly excellent winning poem, Heidi! Janice
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/26/2016 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Janice. I appreciate it :)
Date: 11/26/2016 10:11:00 AM
Love the damp, windy cave imagery! Congrats! :-)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/26/2016 10:23:00 AM
Thanks Mark! :)
Date: 11/26/2016 10:08:00 AM
Well done Heidi, congratulations...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/26/2016 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Charlie :)
Date: 11/18/2016 12:18:00 PM
A beautifully sad poem, Heidi. Well written w/some emotional punch. What's the periodic table sign for gold? Aah, don't bother. Love the poem though. Love always, my poetic friend.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/18/2016 12:26:00 PM
Thank you Freddie. :)
Date: 11/15/2016 6:59:00 PM
Haunting!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/15/2016 7:17:00 PM
I guess that poem for the contest had quite an impact!
Date: 11/15/2016 5:24:00 PM
Now this was sad, so much promise and need washed away in a moments time. Nicely expressed sadness Heidi.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2016 5:29:00 PM
I think you found a winner. :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/15/2016 5:26:00 PM
Thanks Chris - was trying to find a theme for the Fool's gold contest .
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