Fool's Gold

Was a liar
A very clever one,
People excepted him,
Took him at face value,
Fitted in,
They seemed to like him,
Kept a low key,
Worked undercover,
Got himself a good name,
All the time weaving his web,
Pretending to be something he wasn’t,
On the surface, he shone
Underneath shallow,
He made a living
Out of pretense,
Earning plenty of money,
Thinking no one would suspect,
He continued without shame,
Thought he was great,
The real thing,
His life was a sham,
Fools gold deceived many,

14/11/2016
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Julia Ward
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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November 15, 2016 at 10:37 AM
Excellent picture of a con man my friend. So many of them around and they pick their favorite type for prey. Some prey on old people and some prey on young inexperienced people but they are all predators. Great job here. Good luck on the contest. god Bless, JB
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November 15, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Thank you Judy x
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November 14, 2016 at 9:36 PM
Good write, Wendy, our politicians are the worst animal. Good luck in the contest Hugs Eve
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November 15, 2016 at 10:01 AM
Thank you Eve x
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November 14, 2016 at 8:14 PM
Wendy, there are people just like that in life, well done and best of luck in the contest
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November 15, 2016 at 3:12 AM
Thank you, Broken xx
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November 14, 2016 at 7:08 PM
A well written poem, Mrs Wendy. I have found my share of fools gold.Good luck!
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November 17, 2016 at 2:20 PM
Hi thank you, Daniel my whole life has been fools gold lol,
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November 14, 2016 at 6:28 PM
Great writing with that. Good luck in the contest :)
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November 17, 2016 at 2:21 PM
Hi Heidi thank you x your so kind x
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November 14, 2016 at 5:43 PM
I really enjoyed this, I like how you took your theme in a different direction and showed me a side I didn't expect. Nicely crafted.
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November 17, 2016 at 2:22 PM
Thank you, Chris, nice to meet you x
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