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Fooled By Your Charms

Your eyes. The way they shine so brightly, when you see something that excites you. Your hair. The way it flows in the wind so beautifully. Your lips. The way they smile so wide when you’re happy. Your kindness. You care so much. It makes me so happy. You got me attached. You fooled me with your charms. You made me fall in love, now I won’t fall out.

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Ink Empress

Date: 12/1/2023 12:23:00 PM

Ah this is such a soul touching poem, how you’ve expressed so much in a seamless manner is truly impeccable. I especially love the ending, where you’ve expressed and described how one can feel infatuated by kindness etc and as you wrote “ fooled me by your charms” it kind of depicts being lured, by false talks, to get you attached. Many can resonate im sure: pleasure reading this, sending you light

Eli Arendel
Date: 12/1/2023 4:04:00 PM

^v^ <3