Fool, Not King

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Ha! Please take down The eyesore You've mounted atop your head. You wonder why It feels much too heavy. Here's the unvarnished truth. Because, well, because One cannot be A fool And a king Simultaneously Your counterfeit diadems Hold no weight, or value. They wouldn't shine beneath A plethora of suns. Spare yourself The world's ridicule. To rule an empire Unchallenged, To someday sit On a throne, wearing The real McCoy To travel so much as Halfway The long glory road To acquire the royal appellation And prestige you covet, For starters, deep-six Your distended ego And delusions of grandeur Date written: 04/24/2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/1/2022 2:29:00 AM

Poem and video go incredibly well together. I cannot stop smiling.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/1/2022 6:58:00 AM

Thank you for the visit and wonderful comment, Caren:-) I'm glad this poem made you smile!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/29/2022 12:01:00 PM

Your poem fits several rulers Edward. Congratulations on your winning poem. Blessings xxoo

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/29/2022 1:02:00 PM

Thank you very much indeed, Connie:-) Blessings to you as well, my friend.

Gary Radice

Date: 4/29/2022 6:03:00 AM

I can think of so many pretenders to the crown out there who I wish would read this poem for themselves and take in all that's been said Edward. Sadly so many people believe their own hype. Nice work. Cheers - Gary

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/29/2022 1:01:00 PM

Agreed, Gary:-) These "pretenders" believe their own hype thanks to unfailingly loyal yesmen never giving them a reality check! Thanks for your perspective and visit, my friend.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/29/2022 1:56:00 AM

"One cannot be A fool And a king Simultaneously" - Great. Congratulations!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/29/2022 5:17:00 AM

Thanks so much, Christuraj:-) Blessings, my friend.