Fool Me Once

You fooled me once with sunlit words of delusion 
no more daydreams lost in sweet illusion.

So fine-looking and charming you were once
I would goo-goo eye and drool your fine looks 
as soon as you smiled I was in your hooks
My flaky judgments didn't mean I was a dunce

You like to pick, kick, watch and wear a crown 
constant mocking making me out a fool
as you drank your Coors beer on your stool 
proving to be a buffoon and a clown

Cruel thoughts innately placed in my brain
to want to stay and try to work things out
With name-calling whirling about you lout
I've wasted my time, I will not remain




Poetry Contest: Fool me once 
Sponsored by: Brenda Chiri

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/4/2018 5:54:00 AM
No time to be wasted on fools. Congrats on your placement, Eve. Hugs // Charlie
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Date: 8/25/2018 4:36:00 PM
This ode reminds me of the song "Everybody Plays the Fool". Good job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/24/2018 5:21:00 PM
Who the socks fit let them wear it...Nice one on the subject of fool me once...Never again...All the best Eve
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Date: 8/24/2018 4:35:00 PM
Now that was hard hitting for sure. That last stanza, wow, I'm surprised it wasn't written in all CAPS. :) Nicely done Eve. Much luck in the contest
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