Following One's Destiny

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'' ESTUARY " MY PHOTO, ©

May be an image of twilight, nature, coast, sky and ocean

Against life, one should never revolt But Obediently he ought to follow her wise lead to Wherever she decides him to take For Life knows better one’s nature and the laws That govern it Thus One has to become as complied as the waters of the river That Follow the river’s banks all the way to the Estuary, Never trying to hinder the waters’ flow but To hasten it For It is the only way, one, could his destination sooner than Later reach And His destiny's goal to realize! © Demetrios Trifiatis 05 September 2021

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/5/2021 12:49:00 PM

Hello Demetrios, we do not know our destination in life. If i knew then i wpould know when what i am waiting for is coming my way sooner than I thought. blessings my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/6/2021 10:12:00 AM

Hello Demetrios, oh-our souls knows our destination! I wish consciously we would not ignore it. Blessings my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/5/2021 1:05:00 PM

Our soul knows her destination although consciously we ignore it. Blessings .

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/5/2021 7:57:00 AM

As you correctly point out, my friend Demetrios, our life path has already been planned out for us; all we have to do is embrace it now. Every single poem you compose is brimming with valuable pearls of wisdom. There's always something to learn and use from what you have to say. Thanks for sharing.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/5/2021 11:05:00 AM

Being an eternal student of philosophy, I try always to write something worthy. Thank you for appreciating what I write, worthy or not. God bless you my dear friend, Lasaad. Stay healthy.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/5/2021 7:21:00 AM

Every poem you write conveys nuggets of wisdom my friend. Always something to learn and emulate from your words. I am saving this poem beaming intellect into my FAVES.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/5/2021 7:25:00 AM

Thank you for your gracious visit and generosity, my dearest friend, Vijay! Blessings.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/5/2021 2:55:00 AM

Our life path has already been mapped out Demetrios, you're right we just have to follow it. But what an incredible journey it is. Enjoy your Sunday. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/5/2021 5:14:00 AM

Yes, it has, my friend, Tom! You and I have been following it and will till the end! Thank you very much for your precious visit and comment! Have a wonderful Sunday. Stay safe!