Follow the Leader

Looking back I see
A shadow walking close by
I lead, he follows
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 7:15 PM
Awesome, Larry. Great write. Ralph
Devonshire Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 3:11 PM
A spooky setting, but that's the way it is with shadows. Watch them getting longer now as the days get shorter. The shadow will be far taller than you well before dusk. Great senryu! Love, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 1:02 PM
Great write Larry, hope you are enjoying your weekend ¤ Wilma
Trevino Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 10:45 AM
Heh heh, they follow a little tooo well lol they are well trained shadows, you have a good sense of humor, =(^.^)=Royal
Roberts Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 8:36 AM
love it
Carson Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 7:02 AM
Ya think!!! Lovin all your poems; and Aechtners, and Guzzi's and sooo many others! They are funny! Wish they were not almost all at my expense. It looks like someone might be keeping and eye on my PC. Seriously, I would like to learn, but it ain't that important to me.."Turtle Soup. What's the deal? Seriously?
Sweetheart Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 6:24 AM
Absolute brilliance on this one Larry.. good luck in the contest by Paula... wise words.. from someone who knows himself well.. enjoyed my friend..good luck..with luv.. from high in the sky today..
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