Follow the Fire

Endure the travails of somber night
To emerge in bliss of golden sunrise,
Let the fleeting storm pass you by
To spot a rainbow on opaline skies.

Entrust your own founding thoughts
And form your informed paradigm,
Trade not for spurious vacant-prose
Your enriching voice versed in rhyme.

Appreciate your share of sunny days
But also, those of drenching rains,
For they are both eminently essential
To produce bountiful harvest of grains.

Upon falling from your ambitions
Endeavor to rise again and again,
Questing always to reach higher highs
Of worthy goals you wish to attain.

No one fighting on battlefield of life
Sans hurdles unfailingly succeeds,
Yet, success is the enriching feature
Of all endearing, purposeful deeds.

Dwell not in the world of transience
When your aspirations quest forever,
Trounce firmly every sigh of failure
From pursuit of a gratifying endeavor.

Follow the fire in halo of your soul
And rise boldly to tether your claim,
Then look up to arc of life’s horizon,
Watch your fate emboss your name.

December 17, 2022
Placed 2nd: Follow the Fire Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose
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Buehler Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 11:08 AM
A A breathtaking poem, infused with wisdom and stunning images. Hope your day is blessed. :)
Doll Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 8:15 AM
Vijay, I agree with Mike. Your line "Follow the fire in the halo of your soul" is pure poetry. Happy New Year~ Warren
Fowler Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 10:30 AM
The whole thing is beautiful Vijay. I love the last verse! :) Congrats and Happy New Year! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 1:22 PM
Congratulation on your win. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Gentile Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 4:24 AM
Follow the fire in the halo of you soul sums it up perfectly for me Vijay! What a terrific line!!! Happy Holidays !!!
Sands Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 1:38 PM
Congratulations for your win Vijay! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 12:10 PM
Beautiful, Vijay! Love: To spot a rainbow on opaline skies.
Pandit Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 1:14 PM
Thank you Kim--much appreciate.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 8:05 AM
I have been sick and so am late with my congratulations for this wonder and inspiring poem. My forthcoming greetings to you.
Pandit Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 1:13 PM
Thank you Victor. Glad you are feeling better.
Kannan Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 5:29 AM
How beautifully penned!!!! Full of positivity... Feeling so motivated after reading this.... Thank you so much for sharing this uplifting write... A fav for sure and I took a screenshot so that I can read it whenever I feel low...
Pandit Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 1:13 PM
Thank you Supraja.
Daniel Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 10:56 PM
Well deserved win, Vijay, congratulations:)
Pandit Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 1:13 PM
Thank you Jo.
George Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 8:49 PM
"Appreciate your share of sunny days But also, those of drenching rains, For they are both eminently essential To produce bountiful harvest of grains." True words of wisdom..... stated so beautifully and impressively. Both sunshine and rain are needed in life to pursue the fire in our heart and keep it glowing. Congratulations on your win, dear Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 1:13 PM
Many thanks my friend. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, as always.
Alex Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 7:55 PM
"Follow the fire in halo of your soul" - Great poem. Congratulations!
Pandit Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 1:10 PM
Thank you Christuraj.
Seeker Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 6:09 PM
Wow! A fabulous write Vijay! I particularly liked the second, sixth and seventh stanzas. Warmest congratulations on your podium finish
Pandit Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 1:10 PM
Much appreciate, US. Many thanks for visiting.
Kendrick Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 2:12 PM
Back with congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Sara
Pandit Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 1:09 PM
Thank you Sara.
Rose  Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 1:25 PM
You have followed the fire of your souls dear poets. Your poems did capture my soul and set it all aglow. Thank you for joining my contest, Congratulation, dear poets !
Pandit Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 1:09 PM
Much appreciate, Vienna. Many thanks for visiting and commenting.
Sands Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 5:42 AM
This is excellent Vijay! It is inspirational and motivating. I enjoyed reading this today. Have a nice Sunday :)
Pandit Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 6:18 AM
So special to read your kind remarks, Heidi--music to my ear. Much appreciate your visit and comments, as always. Many thanks.
Ibeh Avatar
December 17, 2022 at 8:13 PM
Truly exceptional, Vijay, especially the last stanza. A sure winner!
Pandit Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 6:16 AM
Truly exceptional--that is so special to hear from you, Edward. Many thanks for visiting and commenting my friend.
Poet Avatar
December 17, 2022 at 7:40 PM
This is very honest and moving poetry, Vijay. An inspiring collection of verses that explores the meaning of life's journey from several angles and provides a positive outlook on the many challenges and rewards encountered along the way. In each circumstance, the words you choose have the power to calm and mend the spirit. In order to weather the ups and downs of life, we need to keep the fire burning within. This is an inspiring poem, Vijay, and I hope you do well in the contest.
Pandit Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 6:15 AM
I am always honored to read your detailed insights my friend. Much appreciate you taking the time to write meaningful comments. Many thanks, Lasaad.
Nicole Avatar
December 17, 2022 at 7:13 PM
"Let the fleeting storm pass you by, and appreciate your share of sunny days." Such a positive way to view moments in life. Your thoughts always caress my heart in some way. "Follow the Fire". I completely agree, Vijay. My best to you, my dear friend. Hugs, Brandy
Nicole Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 6:38 PM
Thank you, Vijay. :) Happy Holidays to you.
Pandit Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 1:09 PM
Enjoy your holidays, Brandy.
Nicole Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 7:57 PM
It seems my muse knows that life has been busy. :) It's okay. She'll come out to play when the time is right. Your kindness is greatly appreciated, Vijay. Thank you . . . .
Pandit Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 6:13 AM
Thank you my dear friend for visiting and commenting. Haven't seen your poems lately--I know life is busy. Much appreciate your thoughtful feedback, Brandy. Hugs to you!
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December 17, 2022 at 12:33 PM
- A lovely poem with a lot of truth, Vijay :) - Good luck in the contest :) - Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 6:09 AM
Merry Christmas to you as well my friend. Many thanks for visiting and commenting, Anne-Lise.
Cunningham Avatar
December 17, 2022 at 6:23 AM
Keeping the fire burning within enables us to accept everything in life good and bad. An uplifting verse Vijay, best of luck. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
Pandit Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 6:09 AM
You said it well, Tom. Much appreciate your insights. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Kendrick Avatar
December 17, 2022 at 6:10 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Your fire reaches higher. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Pandit Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Thank you, Sara, for visiting and commenting. Much appreciate as always.
Trifiatis Avatar
December 17, 2022 at 4:53 AM
A profound and inspiring poem that illuminates the path of life that the Lord has paved for to help us realize our dreams, my dearest friend, Vijay. Excellently done. Good luck! Blessings!
Pandit Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 6:07 AM
Profound and inspiring--so nice to hear that from you my learned friend. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks, Demetrios.
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