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Follow the Fire

Endure the travails of somber night To emerge in bliss of golden sunrise, Let the fleeting storm pass you by To spot a rainbow on opaline skies. Entrust your own founding thoughts And form your informed paradigm, Trade not for spurious vacant-prose Your enriching voice versed in rhyme. Appreciate your share of sunny days But also, those of drenching rains, For they are both eminently essential To produce bountiful harvest of grains. Upon falling from your ambitions Endeavor to rise again and again, Questing always to reach higher highs Of worthy goals you wish to attain. No one fighting on battlefield of life Sans hurdles unfailingly succeeds, Yet, success is the enriching feature Of all endearing, purposeful deeds. Dwell not in the world of transience When your aspirations quest forever, Trounce firmly every sigh of failure From pursuit of a gratifying endeavor. Follow the fire in halo of your soul And rise boldly to tether your claim, Then look up to arc of life’s horizon, Watch your fate emboss your name. December 17, 2022 Placed 2nd: Follow the Fire Poetry Contest Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 7/14/2023 11:08:00 AM
A A breathtaking poem, infused with wisdom and stunning images. Hope your day is blessed. :)
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Date: 1/4/2023 8:15:00 AM
Vijay, I agree with Mike. Your line "Follow the fire in the halo of your soul" is pure poetry. Happy New Year~ Warren
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Date: 1/2/2023 10:30:00 AM
The whole thing is beautiful Vijay. I love the last verse! :) Congrats and Happy New Year! :)
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Date: 12/25/2022 1:22:00 PM
Congratulation on your win. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
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Date: 12/21/2022 4:24:00 AM
Follow the fire in the halo of you soul sums it up perfectly for me Vijay! What a terrific line!!! Happy Holidays !!!
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Date: 12/20/2022 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Vijay! :)
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Date: 12/20/2022 12:10:00 PM
Beautiful, Vijay! Love: To spot a rainbow on opaline skies.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/20/2022 1:14:00 PM
Thank you Kim--much appreciate.
Date: 12/19/2022 8:05:00 AM
I have been sick and so am late with my congratulations for this wonder and inspiring poem. My forthcoming greetings to you.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/20/2022 1:13:00 PM
Thank you Victor. Glad you are feeling better.
Date: 12/19/2022 5:29:00 AM
How beautifully penned!!!! Full of positivity... Feeling so motivated after reading this.... Thank you so much for sharing this uplifting write... A fav for sure and I took a screenshot so that I can read it whenever I feel low...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/20/2022 1:13:00 PM
Thank you Supraja.
Date: 12/18/2022 10:56:00 PM
Well deserved win, Vijay, congratulations:)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/20/2022 1:13:00 PM
Thank you Jo.
Date: 12/18/2022 8:49:00 PM
"Appreciate your share of sunny days But also, those of drenching rains, For they are both eminently essential To produce bountiful harvest of grains." True words of wisdom..... stated so beautifully and impressively. Both sunshine and rain are needed in life to pursue the fire in our heart and keep it glowing. Congratulations on your win, dear Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/20/2022 1:13:00 PM
Many thanks my friend. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, as always.
Date: 12/18/2022 7:55:00 PM
"Follow the fire in halo of your soul" - Great poem. Congratulations!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/20/2022 1:10:00 PM
Thank you Christuraj.
Date: 12/18/2022 6:09:00 PM
Wow! A fabulous write Vijay! I particularly liked the second, sixth and seventh stanzas. Warmest congratulations on your podium finish
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/20/2022 1:10:00 PM
Much appreciate, US. Many thanks for visiting.
Date: 12/18/2022 2:12:00 PM
Back with congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Sara
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/20/2022 1:09:00 PM
Thank you Sara.
Date: 12/18/2022 1:25:00 PM
You have followed the fire of your souls dear poets. Your poems did capture my soul and set it all aglow. Thank you for joining my contest, Congratulation, dear poets !
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/20/2022 1:09:00 PM
Much appreciate, Vienna. Many thanks for visiting and commenting.
Date: 12/18/2022 5:42:00 AM
This is excellent Vijay! It is inspirational and motivating. I enjoyed reading this today. Have a nice Sunday :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2022 6:18:00 AM
So special to read your kind remarks, Heidi--music to my ear. Much appreciate your visit and comments, as always. Many thanks.
Date: 12/17/2022 8:13:00 PM
Truly exceptional, Vijay, especially the last stanza. A sure winner!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2022 6:16:00 AM
Truly exceptional--that is so special to hear from you, Edward. Many thanks for visiting and commenting my friend.
Date: 12/17/2022 7:40:00 PM
This is very honest and moving poetry, Vijay. An inspiring collection of verses that explores the meaning of life's journey from several angles and provides a positive outlook on the many challenges and rewards encountered along the way. In each circumstance, the words you choose have the power to calm and mend the spirit. In order to weather the ups and downs of life, we need to keep the fire burning within. This is an inspiring poem, Vijay, and I hope you do well in the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2022 6:15:00 AM
I am always honored to read your detailed insights my friend. Much appreciate you taking the time to write meaningful comments. Many thanks, Lasaad.
Date: 12/17/2022 7:13:00 PM
"Let the fleeting storm pass you by, and appreciate your share of sunny days." Such a positive way to view moments in life. Your thoughts always caress my heart in some way. "Follow the Fire". I completely agree, Vijay. My best to you, my dear friend. Hugs, Brandy
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/20/2022 6:38:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay. :) Happy Holidays to you.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/20/2022 1:09:00 PM
Enjoy your holidays, Brandy.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/18/2022 7:57:00 PM
It seems my muse knows that life has been busy. :) It's okay. She'll come out to play when the time is right. Your kindness is greatly appreciated, Vijay. Thank you . . . .
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2022 6:13:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend for visiting and commenting. Haven't seen your poems lately--I know life is busy. Much appreciate your thoughtful feedback, Brandy. Hugs to you!
Date: 12/17/2022 12:33:00 PM
- A lovely poem with a lot of truth, Vijay :) - Good luck in the contest :) - Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas :) - hugs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2022 6:09:00 AM
Merry Christmas to you as well my friend. Many thanks for visiting and commenting, Anne-Lise.
Date: 12/17/2022 6:23:00 AM
Keeping the fire burning within enables us to accept everything in life good and bad. An uplifting verse Vijay, best of luck. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2022 6:09:00 AM
You said it well, Tom. Much appreciate your insights. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Date: 12/17/2022 6:10:00 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Your fire reaches higher. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2022 6:08:00 AM
Thank you, Sara, for visiting and commenting. Much appreciate as always.
Date: 12/17/2022 4:53:00 AM
A profound and inspiring poem that illuminates the path of life that the Lord has paved for to help us realize our dreams, my dearest friend, Vijay. Excellently done. Good luck! Blessings!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2022 6:07:00 AM
Profound and inspiring--so nice to hear that from you my learned friend. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks, Demetrios.

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