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Follow the Fire

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Take me to the summit muse and create 
in me, a fervor that no one can erase 
Let me make a crucible of gold and date 
what is everlasting and cannot be effaced

Spread the fire of passion across my heart 
use me like you would a feather to the wind 
immerse me in idea gently do your part 
we are two binaries strongly twinned 

Lead me to the poems with a gentle hand 
allow it to be so for my soul must be free 
I have seen it written in the Golden sand 
by the hand of God, who has created me 

Take me to the fire with a steady love 
I know your mine, cuz you fit me like a glove.  


Dec 14 2022 
Example for my contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2022 3:16:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this example for your contest. Good to know about your faith and your muse. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/14/2022 7:34:00 AM

Lovely sonnet, and brilliant ideas.

Stephan McBride

Date: 12/14/2022 7:14:00 AM

Amen, my friend love this very inspiring for all to seek for God to mold and purify one into a Child of God

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/14/2022 5:37:00 AM

"gently do your part we are two binaries strongly twinned"~ Brilliant poetry. So much is misunderstood about fires...they are for purification...and not for eternal damnation. God inspires us, leaves us paths for purification...never punishes and destroys. That is a surface interpretation of scriptures. Blessings my friend.