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This or That, Vol 20 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

Follow Me written 9/15/2023

Breath of absolute love through the unfinished steps of our life walk and follow me in my footsteps. He has observed us with blessed devotion that weaves. Our future in bloom love and songs of spring sweet leaves. With a cherishing reverence with treasuries of future closely woven ample memories. Follow me, breathe with me with most deep fervent love. A lifetime of bliss sparkling shooting stars above.

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 9/25/2023 7:47:00 PM

Amazing piece, Eve:-) I loved it. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/24/2023 8:35:00 AM

Softly sweet journey Eve. Very nice! Congratulations! :)

Valsa George

Date: 9/21/2023 9:33:00 PM

A lovely poem on love! A well deserved win with its sweet flow and depth of feelings. Congratulations dear Eve !

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/21/2023 11:40:00 AM

Congratulations, Eve, on your well-deserved win! I thoroughly enjoyed the beautiful essence of love captured in your poem. It was a delightful experience to read the melodic flow of your words.