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This or That, Vol 20 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh 

Follow Me written 9/15/2023

Follow Me

Breath of absolute love through the unfinished steps
of our life walk and follow me in my footsteps.

He has observed us with blessed devotion that weaves.
Our future in bloom love and songs of spring sweet leaves.

With a cherishing reverence with treasuries
of future closely woven ample memories.

Follow me, breathe with me with most deep fervent love.
A lifetime of bliss sparkling shooting stars above.
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Ibeh Avatar
September 25, 2023 at 7:47 PM
Amazing piece, Eve:-) I loved it. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
Fowler Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 8:35 AM
Softly sweet journey Eve. Very nice! Congratulations! :)
George Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 9:33 PM
A lovely poem on love! A well deserved win with its sweet flow and depth of feelings. Congratulations dear Eve !
Poet Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 11:40 AM
Congratulations, Eve, on your well-deserved win! I thoroughly enjoyed the beautiful essence of love captured in your poem. It was a delightful experience to read the melodic flow of your words.
Pandit Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 11:02 AM
Delightfully honoring love, Eve. Much enjoyed the tenor of your poem. BIG congrats on your win, my friend.
Empress Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 10:48 AM
Sparkling shooting stars above! Love the alliterations and imagery here and how beautifully this flows. Congratulations
Brotherton Avatar
September 17, 2023 at 1:42 PM
A wonderful couplet Eve. A favorite for me for sure.
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2023 at 2:00 PM
Thank you, Jerry, so very much
Buhagiar Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 1:12 AM
A lovely poem in couplets, Eve. Truly a song of Spring. Hugs.
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